Catchy and reasonable title for science urgent!!

[Lana123]

Catchy and reasonable title for science urgent!!?

I need a catchy and reasonable title for a science fair project. This is my problem:
Will the hatch rate percentage of white tinted eggs be the same as tan tinted eggs if they are incubated under the same conditions?

PLEASE HELP THIS IS EXTREMELY URGENT!!!

 

[dretd]

Lana 123, this is the third thread you' ve started asking for urgent help for your science fair project. I judge the Colorado State Science and Engineering Fair so I know a little about science fairs and projects.

If you come up with a title of your own, I will help you edit it or give you advice on how to improve it. I will not under any circumstances do your work for you, nor should any adult or mentor. It's a huge no-no to take someone else's work and represent it as your own (sort of like plagarizing) but highly commendable to seek help in refining the ideas you yourself come up with.

I encourage you to start with your own work and then ask us folks here on BYC Advice like how to improve it, if it makes sense or if we like it, etc.

Good luck on your project and I am very willing to give advice on how you can improve or refine your project!

 

[Lana123]

Lana 123, this is the third thread you' ve started asking for urgent help for your science fair project. I judge the Colorado State Science and Engineering Fair so I know a little about science fairs and projects.

If you come up with a title of your own, I will help you edit it or give you advice on how to improve it. I will not under any circumstances do your work for you, nor should any adult or mentor. It's a huge no-no to take someone else's work and represent it as your own (sort of like plagarizing) but highly commendable to seek help in refining the ideas you yourself come up with.

I encourage you to start with your own work and then ask us folks here on BYC Advice like how to improve it, if it makes sense or if we like it, etc.

Good luck on your project and I am very willing to give advice on how you can improve or refine your project!

Hi!
I am doing work on my own. I ask for help AFTER I finish my work. Ive completed the whole project and I have the title but I am not satisfied with it. Here it is:
"Brown or White. Dont judge an egg by its color"

 

[dretd]

Hi! 
I am doing work on my own. I ask for help AFTER I finish my work. Ive completed the whole project and I have the title but I am not satisfied with it. Here it is:
"Brown or White. Dont judge an egg by its color"

Thank you for presenting the title for me to look at. I would consider the title about average or typical for a project which is to say you can leave it if you are short of time, but can be improved upon.

To enhance it, you can consider adding 'chicken' egg as a descriptor so the judge knows your experiment is about chickens instead of other fowl or even insects.

The title,as read, implies there is no difference between the two egg colors. I hope this is the case. What doesn't tell me is what parameters you are testing. Hatchability? Taste? Nutrition? Rate of lay? Size? Fertility? There are many things you could be testing looking at differences in egg color. The title would be more accurate if it honed down on the one thing you were studying.

Although its important to have a good, descriptive title, I look at the abstract first and foremost as well as the clarity of the display and notebook. Please make sure that you have a clearly stated problem/ hypothsis and a logical layout describing your materials, methods and results. I love to see students who have looked outside and ahead of their experiment. Why did you get the results you did? Was it expected? Why did you think the two egg colors would be the same or different. If your experiment failed, why did it fail. If it went well, what would be follow-up experiments you could perform. If your teacher conducts an interview as part of the grade, have several people interview you prior to the real one so you have your speech prepared. The judge will typically have read through your experiment without you present then will interview you by asking something like ' could you please walk me through your experiment'.

 

[Lana123]

Thank you!! It does seem a bit average but i was looking for something catchy or maybe even cheesy. I am not the best person at wordplay. I thought about adding the word chicken in there but it just doesnt fit. I dont my title to be long anyways. I was actually thknking about somehow adding chicken noises in there. Any ideas?

 

[Lana123]

! It does seem a bit average but i was looking for something catchy or maybe even cheesy. I am not the best person at wordplay. I thought about adding the word chicken in there but it just doesnt fit. I dont my title to be long anyways. I was actually thknking about somehow adding chicken noises in there. Any ideas?
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Thank you for presenting the title for me to look at. I would consider the title about average or typical for a project which is to say you can leave it if you are short of time, but can be improved upon.

To enhance it, you can consider adding 'chicken' egg as a descriptor so the judge knows your experiment is about chickens instead of other fowl or even insects.

The title,as read, implies there is no difference between the two egg colors. I hope this is the case. What doesn't tell me is what parameters you are testing. Hatchability? Taste? Nutrition? Rate of lay? Size? Fertility? There are many things you could be testing looking at differences in egg color. The title would be more accurate if it honed down on the one thing you were studying.

Although its important to have a good, descriptive title, I look at the abstract first and foremost as well as the clarity of the display and notebook. Please make sure that you have a clearly stated problem/ hypothsis and a logical layout describing your materials, methods and results. I love to see students who have looked outside and ahead of their experiment. Why did you get the results you did? Was it expected? Why did you think the two egg colors would be the same or different. If your experiment failed, why did it fail. If it went well, what would be follow-up experiments you could perform. If your teacher conducts an interview as part of the grade, have several people interview you prior to the real one so you have your speech prepared. The judge will typically have read through your experiment without you present then will interview you by asking something like ' could you please walk me through your experiment'.

 

[Lana123]

My experiment has to do with difference between the rate of hatching brown and white eggs in an incubator under the same conditons. Beasically all i do is just incubate chicken eggs and see which of them there is more.