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~ChickLover98~ Good Job! There are a few things that could be changed though.
Starting at the head, it could be a little bit more into proportion with the body. It seems a bit too small for the neck and the rest of the horse. The body needn't be so big, like near the chest and stomach. It makes the horse look overweight.
How about, next time, instead of making the curve of the stomach and chest
farther away from the original circles and such from the
Basic anatomy lesson, make the lines
closer.
The legs look fine, except make them somewhat straighter. We won't be curving them to the way they really look until lessons later on.
Other than those few things, you're doing very good!
I give you a.....B!
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~horsecrazychicklovingkid~ Very good job HCCLK!
Everything seems to be in place. The only thing that could possibly be improved is the neck. Make it a little bit thicker, and not so curved.
I give you a.......A+!
Good job, both of you! You guys are doing great. Although there are some things that could be changed, don't let that throw you off. It takes lots of practice, and making mistakes to get better. Which brings me to this--For the next lesson, don't go off and do it immediatly, then turn it in. Try drawing it a few times, erase it, re-draw it, you get the idea. This'll help you improve.
EH3 shall be doing the next lesson, so these are just your grades. Have a nice week, and remember to practice practice practice!
Your friend, Katie.
