~ Dark Forests ~ *A Wolf RP*

[Alyssa-Bee]

"Sure," she answered, "shall we go?"

Smoke turned farther into the forest and motioned for her to follow.

 

[Crestcrazy2]

Visusi layed in her den, tired and sleepy .

 

[Alyssa-Bee]

(I'll accept some creative criticism )
(What synonym should I use, or how could I make it better?)

(Some tired synonyms are: exhausted, weary, sleepy, spent, etc. You can choose whatever you think fits best! Otherwise, that first chapter is AWESOME!)

 

[Crestcrazy2]

Visusi was hungry and tired, she don't want to get up for food so she just fell asleep.

 

[RoosterWhisperer]

(Some tired synonyms are: exhausted, weary, sleepy, spent, etc. You can choose whatever you think fits best! Otherwise, that first chapter is AWESOME!)

"Thanks!"
(I'll show you the updated piece!)
gtg pick up the kiteen!

 

[Crestcrazy2]

"Thanks!"
(I'll show you the updated piece!)
gtg pick up the kiteen!

Yay!!!!! See ya!!!!

 

[Alyssa-Bee]

"Thanks!"
(I'll show you the updated piece!)
gtg pick up the kiteen!

(How many animals do you have? I found out that LothalRebel has a parrot earlier today!)

 

[Crestcrazy2]

I might have to go....

 

[Alyssa-Bee]

(Okay, I guess I'm going to head off too, now!)

 

[Crestcrazy2]

(How many animals do you have? I found out that LothalRebel has a parrot earlier today!)

i didn't know that!!!!!!!!!!!