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(@Alyssa-Bee, Cresty, here's the full chapter one
Born to greatness
(chapter 1)

It was a long hard night for our chosen hero and his wife, as the fair Hylia was to have her first child.
Red paced the floor outside the bedroom door, worrying about his beloved wife, her voice sounded of pain, and it filled him with an agony of his own, “would she be okay,” he thought, then turned to the window, yet he saw nothing but the dark starry sky.

Several hours, later Hylia laid in bed worn out and tired.
Yet, she didn’t seem to mind, she looked at her beautiful son lying asleep in her arms and couldn’t think of anything else.
Red walked in and saw his tired wife and son, “Hello,” he said gently, “whom might this little one be?”
She replied gently as well, “This is your son, Sky.”
“Hello, Sky,” Red gently whispered and lightly touched the small child.
if you want to read it.)
@LothalRebel!
 
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RoosterWhisperer said:
(@Alyssa-Bee, Cresty, here's the full chapter one
Born to greatness
(chapter 1)

It was a long hard night for our chosen hero and his wife, as the fair Hylia was to have her first child.
Red paced the floor outside the bedroom door, worrying about his beloved wife, her voice sounded of pain, and it filled him with an agony of his own, “would she be okay,” he thought, then turned to the window, yet he saw nothing but the dark starry sky.

Several hours, later Hylia laid in bed worn out and tired.
Yet, she didn’t seem to mind, she looked at her beautiful son lying asleep in her arms and couldn’t think of anything else.
Red walked in and saw his tired wife and son, “Hello,” he said gently, “whom might this little one be?”
She replied gently as well, “This is your son, Sky.”
“Hello, Sky,” Red gently whispered and lightly touched the small child.
if you want to read it.)
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Great Job on the first chapter!!!!!!!!!!
 
RoosterWhisperer said:
(@Alyssa-Bee, Cresty, here's the full chapter one
Born to greatness
(chapter 1)

It was a long hard night for our chosen hero and his wife, as the fair Hylia was to have her first child.
Red paced the floor outside the bedroom door, worrying about his beloved wife, her voice sounded of pain, and it filled him with an agony of his own, “would she be okay,” he thought, then turned to the window, yet he saw nothing but the dark starry sky.

Several hours, later Hylia laid in bed worn out and tired.
Yet, she didn’t seem to mind, she looked at her beautiful son lying asleep in her arms and couldn’t think of anything else.
Red walked in and saw his tired wife and son, “Hello,” he said gently, “whom might this little one be?”
She replied gently as well, “This is your son, Sky.”
“Hello, Sky,” Red gently whispered and lightly touched the small child.
if you want to read it.)
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(Wow! It's so intriguing! I did find that you repeatedly 'tired', though. Maybe you could find another synonym. There's my constructive criticism! :D)
 
RoosterWhisperer said:
(@Alyssa-Bee, Cresty, here's the full chapter one
Born to greatness
(chapter 1)

It was a long hard night for our chosen hero and his wife, as the fair Hylia was to have her first child.
Red paced the floor outside the bedroom door, worrying about his beloved wife, her voice sounded of pain, and it filled him with an agony of his own, “would she be okay,” he thought, then turned to the window, yet he saw nothing but the dark starry sky.

Several hours, later Hylia laid in bed worn out and tired.
Yet, she didn’t seem to mind, she looked at her beautiful son lying asleep in her arms and couldn’t think of anything else.
Red walked in and saw his exauhsted wife and son, “Hello,” he said gently, “whom might this little one be?”
She replied gently as well, “This is your son, Sky.”
“Hello, Sky,” Red gently whispered and lightly touched the small child.
if you want to read it.)
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@Alyssa-Bee , like this?
 

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