Don't stop believin'- Chicken style

[chickenlover91]

My brother plays this song on the piano all the time so one day when he was playing it i thought of this!
PLEASE feel free to tell me what you like and dont like about it and what i should change

its not perfect, and it still needs alot of work but my brother dared me to post it so here it is-



Just a small town hen, livin' in a lonely coop
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a Silkie Roo, born and raised in hollywood
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere

A singer roo in a smokey room
A smell of eggs and pine shaving perfume
For a peck they can share the night
It goes on and on and on and on

(Chorus)
Chickens waiting, up and down the dusty boulevard
Their shadows searching in the night
eggnests and chickens, living just to find emotion
Hiding, in their coop at night.

Working hard to get my eggs,
Everybody wants some scratch
Payin' anything to have a dust bath,
Just one more time
Some will get it, some will not
Some have hatched to sing the blues
Oh, the bocking never ends
It goes on and on and on and on

(Chorus)

Don't stop believin'
Hold on to the feelin'
eggnests chickens

Don't stop believin'
Hold on
eggnest chickens

Don't stop believin'
Hold on to the feelin'
eggnests and chickens

 

[kaybats]

I LOVE IT!!!!!

Thank you for sharing it! I needed that tonight!!!!!

 

[chickenlover91]

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Im glad you like it!

 

[Glenmar]

 

[Peaches Lee]

That is really funny and really good!!!

We need to do more songs!

 

[TroutsChicks]

lol evertime i hear that song i am gonna think of the new lyrics!!

 

[brahmakid11]

awsome!!

 

[ericsgirlie]

You are so creative, my lovely daughter

 

[chickenlover91]

Thank you everyone

! Is there anything you think i should change?

 

[chickenlover91]

what do you think we should do next