I have been a very long time artist thru grade school, high school and colleges.
I admire this painter's work and it is very pleasing to the eye with his theme, color and depth he created with his painting of the struggling girl and the herd bound cow! He made excellent choices in choosing primary and secondary colors for the picture that he wanted to create and to be admired by other artists and viewers alike. He did not "mud up the pictures like La Goya did which it was all dark and black being crept into every color he painted. IMO La Goya's paintings are depressing. So is Van Gogh's ( I got a real hatred toward Van gogh's paintings and every place that has his paintings even on a calendar, I wanted to rip it up so bad.)
I believe this is well written, you have submitted alot of details and letting the reader know of what you are trying to verbilize the painting. Even you can tell it to a blind person (who has lost their eyesight at a later date) and describe it, they would understand it clearly!
Now give that essay paper to the teacher. Let us know how you fared out!
I admire this painter's work and it is very pleasing to the eye with his theme, color and depth he created with his painting of the struggling girl and the herd bound cow! He made excellent choices in choosing primary and secondary colors for the picture that he wanted to create and to be admired by other artists and viewers alike. He did not "mud up the pictures like La Goya did which it was all dark and black being crept into every color he painted. IMO La Goya's paintings are depressing. So is Van Gogh's ( I got a real hatred toward Van gogh's paintings and every place that has his paintings even on a calendar, I wanted to rip it up so bad.)
I believe this is well written, you have submitted alot of details and letting the reader know of what you are trying to verbilize the painting. Even you can tell it to a blind person (who has lost their eyesight at a later date) and describe it, they would understand it clearly!
Now give that essay paper to the teacher. Let us know how you fared out!
