help me edit my book

[ejtrout31]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oNXMO0V_OgD-bEJAlHBFIPwcRTmNPUSQDq8pucbEfQg/edit?usp=sharing

help me edit my newest book.

 

[Rose Quartz]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oNXMO0V_OgD-bEJAlHBFIPwcRTmNPUSQDq8pucbEfQg/edit?usp=sharing

help me edit my newest book.

a mound of sand

In the final paragraph:
along should be a long.
in the second sentence there should be a comma after the word him.
God in that context should be capitalized.

All I'm going to do is say what I found spelling wise. I won't comment on how our beliefs differ.

 

[ejtrout31]

a mound of sand

In the final paragraph:
along should be a long.
in the second sentence there should be a comma after the word him.
God in that context should be capitalized.

All I'm going to do is say what I found spelling wise. I won't comment on how our beliefs differ.

Thank you so much especially for your respect.

 

[Rose Quartz]

Thank you so much especially for your respect.

Np ^u^

 

[perchie.girl]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1oNXMO0V_OgD-bEJAlHBFIPwcRTmNPUSQDq8pucbEfQg/edit?usp=sharing

help me edit my newest book.

I am curious do you write children's books?



deb

 

[ejtrout31]

I am curious do you write children's books?



deb

Actually this is my first

 

[perchie.girl]

Actually this is my first

ah... I took the cue from the word Newest... meaning its not the first.... VBG

deb

 

[ejtrout31]

oh yea i guess it kind of sounds like that

 

[perchie.girl]

oh yea i guess it kind of sounds like that

Words have great power.... Crafting with them is special... And a gift everyone should hone.

I am a science fiction writer. Not published but I hope to one day... I do pretty well with short stories Three or four pages... Those I write from what I see of the world... Kind of like a bug on a wall observer.

For what its worth I have been writing since I was in grade school....

deb

 

[ejtrout31]

If u had to rate my children’s book from 1-5 what would it be.