How a seat belt changed my life. Book is OUT! Pg. 21 for info!

[BrattishTaz]

Great job!!

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

 

[maple]

Hanging on to every word....


I think I saw a typo in one of the chapters...I'll come back after parent/teacher conferance and point it out so you can fix it.

 

[maple]

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Just trying to catch any lil things you may want to correct.... "one minute" right? Last paragraph.

 

[maple]

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I think how it normally is spoken is "I heard a clap of thunder." or "I heard thunder." 4th paragraph

I was also wondering about your brother you mentioned in a previous chapter...I don't know if he is older or younger and I think maybe it would help to clarify so we can get a better picture.

 

[maple]

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I would FEEL this horrible pain or I felt this horrible pain. 2nd paragraph

 

[maple]

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Just wanted to clarify...you were talking about being at your mom's and your step-dad was driving you home. So now did your dad come to visit you? Or is this your step dad that came into your room?

This itching and hotness sounds miserable...did you find out if you were allergic to something? One of the meds or something?

 

[maple]

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You said when the accident happened you saw white and the cover reminds me of broken glass.

 

[kyeschicks]

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You said when the accident happened you saw white and the cover reminds me of broken glass.

thank you!! for letting me know where's some typos

This is just like a rough draft....the real final thing is in my computer. As everyone tells me the typos and things that I need to clarify, I go back to the document and change/clarify things. So if you still see the typos in here then don't worry about it cuz I've probably changed it already in the real document

that's kinda like an advantage for the book owners

The release date is right around the corner and I've got MANY things to change! that's what's keeping me behind! I have the 8th, 9th and 10th chapters written already and I just need to edit them, but I can't because I'm still working with the past chapters. I'm still not sure if I'll be posting the 8th chapter tomorrow because I'm also catching up on work in school since I got REALLY sick recently and almost went to the ER :S and y'all are getting closer to the real meaning of the covers

keep guessing

 

[kyeschicks]

Small update-

The second edition cover might be getting delayed......so don't be expecting to see it tomorrow

 

[eenie114]

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*Snaps fingers* Curses.