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If you read my essay, you probably figured out that I really want to be published. I know that it's not easy, especially considering I'm a minor. Does anyone have good advice? To read a sample of my stuff, PM me. I write short stories, poems, (two short stories and a poem have been published) songs, and books. I promise that my stuff is not run-of-the mill. I am not saying I am perfect, but I am saying that I've had a lot of people, strangers included, tell me that my writing is good. I am not asking for a big guide, but I'm asking for things like how to know which publishers are reputable, should I consider getting an agent, if so, where could I find a good agent? You get the idea. I'll take any advice, and to get a sample of my books (what I'm trying to get published) please send me a PM. Critques greatly appreciated.
Here are a few of my writings.
This is a short story I wrote about 5 years ago after my dog went missing. This one has been published.
Roxy! Roxy! the worried family called. Their dog, Roxy, had turned up missing. She was a beautiful Dalmatian, with what was to them one of the most beautiful coats in the world. Each deep black spot sparkled and gleamed in the sun.
Roxy! Alexis, the youngest daughter, shouted worriedly. Roxy was everything to her. They played together. They learned together. They were mischievous together. Of course, they did this in varied ways. Roxy would trash the house; Alexis would prank her siblings. Both, of course, got into heaps of trouble. Roxy was her best friend. She was in a frenzy. Her very best friend had disappeared.
Okay, I guess well go searching now. Alex, the father, said, heading towards the car, the keys jingling as the swung in his hand. The family got into the car and rode around the neighborhood, searching high and low for their pet.
I miss Roxy. Maria, the oldest daughter, said worriedly. I hope shes okay, too. Maria added. The family searched their neighborhood thoroughly. They had stopped at almost every house, but no one had seen Roxy. Every one else was not home, so they certainly couldnt provide any evidence of what had happened. Maria and Alexis sighed sadly. Tears shone brightly in their eyes. Their loyal dog, who meant everything in the world to them, had gone missing. What a terrible thought it was. If only they could do something to help. They put up posters. They posted pictures of her everywhere. Roxy, however, was still nowhere to be found. They needed her, and right now, she needed them. After all, how would she find food? They had always looked out for each other. Roxy had always been protective. They sometimes referred to her as their guard dog. They tried to remember good times with her to help comfort them as they searched. It was getting too late. They could not possibly search anymore that night. It had gotten too dark. It was dark and the air was filled with rain clouds. Had the weather been better, they may have stayed out and searched with flashlights, but as it was it was simply no use. They decided to go home. Just as they got inside, a huge thunderstorm began. Maria and Alexis sat at the window, sadly looking out. As they watched each drop of rain roll down the window, tears rolled down their cheeks as well, each in harmony. Maria and Alexis hugged. Everyone in the family worried. They all thought she was strong, but none of them were sure if she could survive. They decided to look at pictures of Roxy to keep them entertained. The sadness was a hard blow to them. They missed her. They didnt want to wait until the next day to search again, but they had to. Sighing, Maria and Alexis went to bed. They had dreams about Roxy. They were happy dreams. Roxy was back home safe and sound. If only it were true.
The next morning, they ate breakfast gloomily. Then they went to search for Roxy again. Yet again, their beloved pet was nowhere to be found. They searched for what seemed like eons longer. They still did not find her. The family stopped for a lunch break, each enjoying their own sandwich. They went home and went to bed late that night.
On the third day, they searched again. Still, they found nothing. When the girls searched the park, they were deeply saddened, and reminded of their beloved pet. Dogs and owners seemed to be everywhere.
The fourth day, Maria and Alexis were at soccer practice. They were playing very poor games. Their heartache took away their focus. Suddenly, they saw something moving in the distance. No. they thought, It cant be true. However, it was. Roxy was running towards them. The family reunited.
Maria and Alexis screamed simultaneously, Roxy! I love you! Their dog rushed towards them. They gave her gigantic hugs. Everything was back to normal. That is the Lexingtons story of what true love is all about.
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This is an unfinished story about a princess whose parents were ashamed of her and no one knew she existed.
The Forgotten Princess
Staring out of her window, a lonely young teenager looked unhappy. The view wasnt of much. All she could see below her were a few trees and a grassy lawn. Sighing, the girl drew her pink drapes closed. She reached down to pet her companion, a sleeping mutt. Jenna, Im so tired of all of this. The girl said. Absentmindedly, she reached up to touch the jeweled crown on her head.
The girl was a princess, but she wasnt treated like one. She only left the castle once every year, and then her parents tried to hide her from the public eye as much as they could. Only the princess knew why they hid her. The peasants had their speculations, but they would never know for sure. The truth was that her parents, the King and Queen, were embarrassed of her. They were hiding from the public that their daughter was different than most princesses. Princess Anna was very delicate. She was often sick. Consequently, the princess stayed in her room almost all of the time. The only time she left, it was to eat. Even then, she was not allowed to eat with the rest of the royal family. They were all afraid that they would catch something from her. They had themselves convinced that they loved her and did everything they could for her, but this wasnt true. If they had really loved her, they would have allowed her to be around them. Instead of trying to be kind to her, any members of the family, even her brothers, would turn away and drop eye contact quickly. Some of the servants who worked directly for the royal family would do just the same. When the princess was well enough, she grew bored of her neglect and imprisonment in her room. Jenna and her own personal servant, Sarah, who was also her best friend, were her only visitors.
As she sat on her bed, staring down at her pink sheets decorated with jewels in the shape of hearts, she heard a fanfare. The princess walked over to her window and drew back the shades. She couldnt see the courtyard from her window, but as she listened hard, she heard cheers and other indistinct talking. Soon she heard the sound of the royal familys carriage as the wheels hit the brick floor of the courtyard. A few tears escaped from her eyes as she looked out the window. She couldnt see it, but she knew what was happening. The event had been planned for months. The rest of her family was going to vacation for a week in a remote place. Anna hadnt even been told the location of their getaway, but she knew it was today that they were leaving. They were leaving her behind again. Hey. A soft, familiar voice spoke from behind her, and she felt a gentle hand on her shoulder. It was Sarah. Anna turned to look at her best friend. Sarah didnt have to say anything. Anna knew she meant to comfort her. Sighing, the young princess wondered allowed, Why did I have to be a little different? She asked it with a frown. Sarah put an arm around her friend. I dont know, but Im happy with you being the way you are. She said softly.
With her family gone, Anna left her room. The young princess and her best friend went for a walk along the edge of the castle grounds. As Anna and Sarah walked, they both grew more aware of their beautiful surroundings. I cant even remember the last time we did this. Anna confessed to Sarah. The servant girl nodded. Its nice out here, isnt it? she said. Anna smiled. Wonderful. She agreed, enjoying the sunshine and fresh air for the first time that year. The spring flowers were in bloom, and they added to the beauty of the castle. The walk was leisurely and relaxing. Both girls enjoyed it. Anna especially enjoyed the fresh air.
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Here are a few of my writings.
This is a short story I wrote about 5 years ago after my dog went missing. This one has been published.
Roxy! Roxy! the worried family called. Their dog, Roxy, had turned up missing. She was a beautiful Dalmatian, with what was to them one of the most beautiful coats in the world. Each deep black spot sparkled and gleamed in the sun.
Roxy! Alexis, the youngest daughter, shouted worriedly. Roxy was everything to her. They played together. They learned together. They were mischievous together. Of course, they did this in varied ways. Roxy would trash the house; Alexis would prank her siblings. Both, of course, got into heaps of trouble. Roxy was her best friend. She was in a frenzy. Her very best friend had disappeared.
Okay, I guess well go searching now. Alex, the father, said, heading towards the car, the keys jingling as the swung in his hand. The family got into the car and rode around the neighborhood, searching high and low for their pet.
I miss Roxy. Maria, the oldest daughter, said worriedly. I hope shes okay, too. Maria added. The family searched their neighborhood thoroughly. They had stopped at almost every house, but no one had seen Roxy. Every one else was not home, so they certainly couldnt provide any evidence of what had happened. Maria and Alexis sighed sadly. Tears shone brightly in their eyes. Their loyal dog, who meant everything in the world to them, had gone missing. What a terrible thought it was. If only they could do something to help. They put up posters. They posted pictures of her everywhere. Roxy, however, was still nowhere to be found. They needed her, and right now, she needed them. After all, how would she find food? They had always looked out for each other. Roxy had always been protective. They sometimes referred to her as their guard dog. They tried to remember good times with her to help comfort them as they searched. It was getting too late. They could not possibly search anymore that night. It had gotten too dark. It was dark and the air was filled with rain clouds. Had the weather been better, they may have stayed out and searched with flashlights, but as it was it was simply no use. They decided to go home. Just as they got inside, a huge thunderstorm began. Maria and Alexis sat at the window, sadly looking out. As they watched each drop of rain roll down the window, tears rolled down their cheeks as well, each in harmony. Maria and Alexis hugged. Everyone in the family worried. They all thought she was strong, but none of them were sure if she could survive. They decided to look at pictures of Roxy to keep them entertained. The sadness was a hard blow to them. They missed her. They didnt want to wait until the next day to search again, but they had to. Sighing, Maria and Alexis went to bed. They had dreams about Roxy. They were happy dreams. Roxy was back home safe and sound. If only it were true.
The next morning, they ate breakfast gloomily. Then they went to search for Roxy again. Yet again, their beloved pet was nowhere to be found. They searched for what seemed like eons longer. They still did not find her. The family stopped for a lunch break, each enjoying their own sandwich. They went home and went to bed late that night.
On the third day, they searched again. Still, they found nothing. When the girls searched the park, they were deeply saddened, and reminded of their beloved pet. Dogs and owners seemed to be everywhere.
The fourth day, Maria and Alexis were at soccer practice. They were playing very poor games. Their heartache took away their focus. Suddenly, they saw something moving in the distance. No. they thought, It cant be true. However, it was. Roxy was running towards them. The family reunited.
Maria and Alexis screamed simultaneously, Roxy! I love you! Their dog rushed towards them. They gave her gigantic hugs. Everything was back to normal. That is the Lexingtons story of what true love is all about.
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This is an unfinished story about a princess whose parents were ashamed of her and no one knew she existed.
The Forgotten Princess
Staring out of her window, a lonely young teenager looked unhappy. The view wasnt of much. All she could see below her were a few trees and a grassy lawn. Sighing, the girl drew her pink drapes closed. She reached down to pet her companion, a sleeping mutt. Jenna, Im so tired of all of this. The girl said. Absentmindedly, she reached up to touch the jeweled crown on her head.
The girl was a princess, but she wasnt treated like one. She only left the castle once every year, and then her parents tried to hide her from the public eye as much as they could. Only the princess knew why they hid her. The peasants had their speculations, but they would never know for sure. The truth was that her parents, the King and Queen, were embarrassed of her. They were hiding from the public that their daughter was different than most princesses. Princess Anna was very delicate. She was often sick. Consequently, the princess stayed in her room almost all of the time. The only time she left, it was to eat. Even then, she was not allowed to eat with the rest of the royal family. They were all afraid that they would catch something from her. They had themselves convinced that they loved her and did everything they could for her, but this wasnt true. If they had really loved her, they would have allowed her to be around them. Instead of trying to be kind to her, any members of the family, even her brothers, would turn away and drop eye contact quickly. Some of the servants who worked directly for the royal family would do just the same. When the princess was well enough, she grew bored of her neglect and imprisonment in her room. Jenna and her own personal servant, Sarah, who was also her best friend, were her only visitors.
As she sat on her bed, staring down at her pink sheets decorated with jewels in the shape of hearts, she heard a fanfare. The princess walked over to her window and drew back the shades. She couldnt see the courtyard from her window, but as she listened hard, she heard cheers and other indistinct talking. Soon she heard the sound of the royal familys carriage as the wheels hit the brick floor of the courtyard. A few tears escaped from her eyes as she looked out the window. She couldnt see it, but she knew what was happening. The event had been planned for months. The rest of her family was going to vacation for a week in a remote place. Anna hadnt even been told the location of their getaway, but she knew it was today that they were leaving. They were leaving her behind again. Hey. A soft, familiar voice spoke from behind her, and she felt a gentle hand on her shoulder. It was Sarah. Anna turned to look at her best friend. Sarah didnt have to say anything. Anna knew she meant to comfort her. Sighing, the young princess wondered allowed, Why did I have to be a little different? She asked it with a frown. Sarah put an arm around her friend. I dont know, but Im happy with you being the way you are. She said softly.
With her family gone, Anna left her room. The young princess and her best friend went for a walk along the edge of the castle grounds. As Anna and Sarah walked, they both grew more aware of their beautiful surroundings. I cant even remember the last time we did this. Anna confessed to Sarah. The servant girl nodded. Its nice out here, isnt it? she said. Anna smiled. Wonderful. She agreed, enjoying the sunshine and fresh air for the first time that year. The spring flowers were in bloom, and they added to the beauty of the castle. The walk was leisurely and relaxing. Both girls enjoyed it. Anna especially enjoyed the fresh air.
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