I am no more than a battery hen -- Come see the LAST chapter today!

[yankeedoodle300]

Hurry up, Luv. ! don't keep me waiting!

 

[luvinmychickens]

Ok, about to write.

This book seems like a hit! Way better than the other one I have started!

 

[luvinmychickens]

Chapter 3

I finally, got a big hole in my 'egg'. Almost enough for me to get out of it.

"Sky? Grouchy? Sea? Anybody?" I clucked.

No one answered."'Where are you guys?"

Still, no answer. I heard something, rolling across the floor. I looked out the hole. There was a human, pushing a giant basket, that was on wheels. There were a whole bunch of other eggs in it. It grabbed any egg with a big hole in it, and put it in the giant basket. It was getting closer to me. I panicked. What am I going to do? It was about 10 feet away from me. It took more eggs, and put them in the basket, carelessly. It was getting closer and closer.

It was just a few eggs away from me now. "No, no don't take me! Somebody help!" I screamed.

It was too late. It grabbed me. I wobbled around.

"Ouch! Hey! Stop that!" I chirped, as I wobbled around in my egg. It tossed me into the giant basket on wheels.

 

[Theeggboxtoo]

 

[Gerbil]

Very nice, although the title is a bit hard to make out.

 

[luvinmychickens]

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Let me change that.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

Ooh!

 

[luvinmychickens]

Chapter 4

I could feel the basket move on it's uneven wheels. I looked out the hole I have made. All I could see was a bunch of other eggs, in the same basket as me. I was frightened. I was jiggling around in the filled basket. I was so scared, I jammed right out of the egg to escape. But there was no way out of the basket. It wheeled us down the long hall. Humans took the trays that we are on, out of the moving basket, that I now realize, is a cart. They were throwing the deformed chicks, half-hatched chicks, shells, and cockerels in a garbage can. I could smell the unhealthy air. It reeked of tobacco and gases. It burned my eyes and lungs. I felt sick. I wept, as I watched others jump off the tray, trying to save their lives. But instead, the cart rolled over them, leaving a bloody mess. My stomach ached. Not just from the tobacco and gases, but from seeing the other poor chicks getting killed. In the garbage can, I could see the deformed chicks and males, trying their best to jump to the top. But nothing happened. They only got buried again, because others, trying to save their lives too, knocked them down. I was glad I wasn't in there, but I knew for a fact, that wasn't going to get better.

 

[Magic Birdie]

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[Theeggboxtoo]

More please!