I'm Lost In This World (Story Not 2 Copy U SCM)

[IMMASHEIK]

I sit in my bedroom waiting my parents to come.... I hear them talking slowly in th distance.... I'm only 12 and I have nothing to offer it seems to them.... they dont udnerstand me, they think I'm a joke.... Abuse is what they do...... I can smell the Moon Shine they've drinken. I look through my spy hole and see 5 Bottles of Moon Shine on the ground empty... I'm scared now.... I know what will happen. My little sister is sleeping on our matress. She looks worn ut to death. The cuts and brusies on her look like they're healing.......

 

[TechnoCat]

hmmm...

 

[IMMASHEIK]

I'm not copying u i swear

 

[LittleLady98]

 

[Symphony]

I really like the story line. But, IMO, the writing is a little bit of, skimming off the top, sorta like a RP. Want me to help?

 

[IMMASHEIK]

The door opens with a slam! My dad stands there with a bottle of Moon Shine. He's grinning evily...... My mom is passed out on the floor with a bottle. "Kayla your coming with me," dad says... I got up and walked with him. Dad takes me to his room. He pulled out a lether belt and slapped me with it. "YOU WORTHLESS LITTLE RAT!!!!" He screamed. He slapped me 13 times. He kicked me in the stomach and threw me back in my room. I endured the pain as blood ran down my body.... He grabbed Kala (my sister) by her shirt and dragged her to the same room. "NOOO PLEASE KAYLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Kala screamed. I ran after her screaming No but he slammed the door. I heard little cries and sounds of hitting and kicking..... "LET HER GO!!!" I yelled. My dad opened the door and there laid Kala in a pool of blood. tears all down her face. I looked at him.... I ran over to Kala and picked her up and i walked back to our room. My dad just stood there, and then he passed out.....