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Ok, I just couldn't help myself!
Here we go...
Please do not copy or paste my story. It is perfectly fine to make your own, but do not use the theme or characters or events of my story.
Chapter 1: The Newbie
"Oh my! Look at all those people!" thought Jesse, "Wouldn't you take me home?"
Jesse was trying so hard to be patient. She had been stuck at this feed store for the last two weeks, along with four other little Barred Rocks. Her closest friend, Maple, was quite anxious too!
"What if I get too old and big, and no one will want me?? Oh no! I'm not a baby chick anymore, Jesse. Those featherless birds like cute, tiny and fluffy chicks! Not ugly ducklings!!," Maple cried out, "besides! It's the middle of April, not summer!"
"Calm down, ok?! We're going to be all right. Oh, oh! Act all cute, here comes someone!"
The feed store lady open up the brooder and took Jesse and Maple out and put them in a little box. It was so dark! They felt a featherless bird pick up the box and set them on a counter. Then they started talking Jibberish. But Jesse caught one phrase, "Here is your change, ma'am. Have a nice day."
What change? What day? thought Jesse. Were they going to a new home?
"Ah! What was that noise?" Maple exclaimed as the featherless birds started their car, "Who goes there??"
"Shh! I think we're going to a new home," Jesse scolded. She couldn't help but be quite scared herself. What if they don't like me? What if they take me back? What if we crash? All these doubts started running through poor little Jesse's brain. This was a new and stressful experience for her. But she knew she had to pretend to be the brave one. Maple was as scared as a mouse!
All of a sudden, they heard a bunch of sniffing. Maple and Jesse peeped through a slit they found in the box. A dog! It was wagging its tail like a propeller.
"Chicks! Chicks! Oh, I love chicks! I was hoping my human would bring some home soon!" The overly excited dog exclaimed, "More friends!"
"What the," Jesse questioned, " More friends?"
Another big dog came over and sniffed the box lazily. "Big whoop. Just some more birds full of poop," the fat dog explained.
Jesse was hurt by his comment. "We are not just birds full of poop. Now be respectful or I'll peck you!"
The fat dog chuckled and walked away.
I'll show him! Little Jesse thought.
The featherless birds took Jesse and Maple inside of the featherless birds coop. They walked through a cold breeze when they opened the door. Whoosh! Jesse almost fell over. Maple was shivering in one of the corners of the box. Jesse attempted to comfort her, but it was no use. She wouldn't snap out of it. The box was suddenly set down. The chicks heard some ripping noises.
Oh no! We're next!" Maple screamed. Jesse just rolled her eyes. "What a drama queen!" thought Jesse, "They couldn't possibly bring us home to rip us in half, right?
Suddenly, the top of the box was opened. Jesse and Maple had to shield their eyes from the light with their wings. It was so bright! A ginormous hand came down and took Maple. "AHHHH!!! Put me down this instant! I will not tolerate this kind of torture!" Her beak was forced into some nice and cold water. The same thing happened to Jesse.
"Food!!!!" they said simultaneously. They surely built up an appetite!
After they pigged out on some plain crumbles and cold, delicious water, they slowly walked under the brooder lamp and fell asleep.
to be continued.......

Please do not copy or paste my story. It is perfectly fine to make your own, but do not use the theme or characters or events of my story.
Chapter 1: The Newbie
"Oh my! Look at all those people!" thought Jesse, "Wouldn't you take me home?"
Jesse was trying so hard to be patient. She had been stuck at this feed store for the last two weeks, along with four other little Barred Rocks. Her closest friend, Maple, was quite anxious too!
"What if I get too old and big, and no one will want me?? Oh no! I'm not a baby chick anymore, Jesse. Those featherless birds like cute, tiny and fluffy chicks! Not ugly ducklings!!," Maple cried out, "besides! It's the middle of April, not summer!"
"Calm down, ok?! We're going to be all right. Oh, oh! Act all cute, here comes someone!"
The feed store lady open up the brooder and took Jesse and Maple out and put them in a little box. It was so dark! They felt a featherless bird pick up the box and set them on a counter. Then they started talking Jibberish. But Jesse caught one phrase, "Here is your change, ma'am. Have a nice day."
What change? What day? thought Jesse. Were they going to a new home?
"Ah! What was that noise?" Maple exclaimed as the featherless birds started their car, "Who goes there??"
"Shh! I think we're going to a new home," Jesse scolded. She couldn't help but be quite scared herself. What if they don't like me? What if they take me back? What if we crash? All these doubts started running through poor little Jesse's brain. This was a new and stressful experience for her. But she knew she had to pretend to be the brave one. Maple was as scared as a mouse!
All of a sudden, they heard a bunch of sniffing. Maple and Jesse peeped through a slit they found in the box. A dog! It was wagging its tail like a propeller.
"Chicks! Chicks! Oh, I love chicks! I was hoping my human would bring some home soon!" The overly excited dog exclaimed, "More friends!"
"What the," Jesse questioned, " More friends?"
Another big dog came over and sniffed the box lazily. "Big whoop. Just some more birds full of poop," the fat dog explained.
Jesse was hurt by his comment. "We are not just birds full of poop. Now be respectful or I'll peck you!"
The fat dog chuckled and walked away.
I'll show him! Little Jesse thought.
The featherless birds took Jesse and Maple inside of the featherless birds coop. They walked through a cold breeze when they opened the door. Whoosh! Jesse almost fell over. Maple was shivering in one of the corners of the box. Jesse attempted to comfort her, but it was no use. She wouldn't snap out of it. The box was suddenly set down. The chicks heard some ripping noises.
Oh no! We're next!" Maple screamed. Jesse just rolled her eyes. "What a drama queen!" thought Jesse, "They couldn't possibly bring us home to rip us in half, right?
Suddenly, the top of the box was opened. Jesse and Maple had to shield their eyes from the light with their wings. It was so bright! A ginormous hand came down and took Maple. "AHHHH!!! Put me down this instant! I will not tolerate this kind of torture!" Her beak was forced into some nice and cold water. The same thing happened to Jesse.
"Food!!!!" they said simultaneously. They surely built up an appetite!
After they pigged out on some plain crumbles and cold, delicious water, they slowly walked under the brooder lamp and fell asleep.
to be continued.......
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