Mitty - The horse story

Chapter 28

We followed the two cruel stallions through the jungle. The jungle was murky and dark, I hated every inch of it, I was in the middle of one of my violent mood swings. If Mongol or Scarface gave me any guff I would have given it right back.
My pains, for the moment had subsided, much to my relief. But Agnes' hit with full force on her sorrel body, I often glanced her way to see if she was fairing well, tears ran down her dejected, face her tail dragged, and I could sense she was in extreme pain.
We continued weaving through the glaring trees, I shut all the hideous noises out of my ears and concentrated on Agnes.
10 minutes later I could bear it no longer. My heart cried out for light and truth while my body weeped and despaired. I was in the depths of evil, my best friend could die, my body had returned to it's former state of pain and my head was full of worry and grief at being in the Evillands for the rest of my life. I was only a year old. How could this be happening to me? I always got into trouble, I would get my mother angry, I never even got to say goodbye to Alastair. I wonder if I was falling for him, I mourned, Either way, I'll never see him again. He was my next best friend besides Agnes, and just to spite him I ran off into the woods! Never to see him again, he was like my friend, my father I never had, and in some ways the stallion I almost fell in love with. Why did I leave him for a troublesome trot in the woods? I dragged Agnes in it, too. Some horse I am. I get what I deserve, then. The wife of a evil stallion who has other wives, too. One for each day of the week. Why, oh WHY did I do that, Mitty? I'm a pitiful, helpless mare. Without Alastair I'm lost. Even if I did see him again he would probably be mad at me for running off. Perhaps, someday I can make my escape from the Evillands...? It doesn't matter, I'm a stupid, moronic mare that is getting what she deserves. And with that sultry note, I stopped pondering my sad life for Mongol stopped and I nearly ran into him.
"Watch it," He growled.
"I'm not sorry," I eyed him back.
"Why you lit-"
"Mongol!" Scarface interrupted, "we have business to attend to, but seeing that your more interested in arguing with a mare than in your job perhaps I should exterminate you. Take your pick."
"What is it." Mongol glowered at his boss.
" 'What is it?' We have to hurry if were going to make it, idiot."
We rushed on, I was shocked that there was a tunnel with silvery leaves draping around it, but I plunged in anyways after Mongol. I nudged Agnes to keep her hopes up, we may yet get out.


Have to go, will finish tommorow or Wednesday!
 
that's awesome! keep writing!!
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more stories!!! what will happen to poor, poor, mitty?

Awesome stuff
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It only is going to get better from now on, I promise.​
 
Chapter 29

The musky smell in the tunnel was overpowering. I felt like my lungs were contaminated with the clinging stench of evil, I glanced over at Agens, she looked positively sick. Oh how could we go on?! My body was pounding from exhaustion and I felt disgustingly dirty. Heck, whens the last time I've had a bath in the river? Probably when I jumped in to save my life from the rockslide...oh boy. That was months ago.
I pushed myself on, living is better than dying, I decided. I, Mitty the mutt made the decision to bravely face all dangers as a mare, not a filly and to love exuberant life while I still had it in me.
I had Agnes by my side, and Alastair may yet be alive! I urged myself to think on the brighter side of things, I had four hooves and a head, right?
I stepped with a new confidence in my head and heart, I gave Anges the first grin in a long time, she gave me a puzzled look but then faintly smiled back. The tunnel must have been a mile or so but after about twenty minutes of brisk walking we reached the end. I could see a funnel of pale light emerging from around the corner, it was a cold light, unwelcoming, ghastly, and it seemed to wrap it's icy fingers around my heart, striking me with fear.
We went closer and closer, each step sent a tremor through my body, I took a deep breath and pushed myself onward.
What met my eyes before us made me shiver! Hard stone entries and pillars stood like a maze in the whole roomlike place. Scarface seemed to know the way perfectly, he went in and out, up stairs, downstairs, around and through a doorway...I was getting dizzy. An endless maze, I was plub tuckered out, but managed to keep my chin up.
Then, straight before us was a twenty meter circle of sand with a magnificent dark horse and ALASTAIR in the middle!
My heart skipped a beat. For there was the stallion I loved.

Alastair stiffened at the full sight of his sire in the harsh light. Alastair was a strong stallion, but ever since escaping from his father he knew he'd have to face up to him, which was his biggest fear. He knew the day was dawning soon when him and his father would have a battle, a battle that was inevitable. Alastair was fearless of humans, cougars, bears, rivers, and his brother, but he was afraid of his father. It had slowly ruined Alastair from the bright beautiful stallion he used to be, it had kinda shriveled him and besides being large and courageous he really wasn't different from any other stallion.
This bothered him, for he knew this fear and not facing up to it was ruining him, slowly, but hurting his soul. And here he was, he was at his destination, in front of his sire. They eyed eachother, seething at the other male...
Mourir's black coat was flecked with white, his stringy mane embellished his curvy neck. His legs were hard and capable of many miles upon miles of cantering, his hooves were hard and weathered. Mourir's presence was extremely unpleasant, dark and lurking, his blue eyes haunting, mocking, and dangerous all at the same time.
He eyed Alastair, his son with seething anger.
Alastair eyed him, "So father, how have things been lately in your stinking cloud of evil?"
"Oh," Mourir began sarcastically, his black lips spitting words out. "just lovely, Alastair. How about you and your little herd of mares? You've become such a good little boy, I'm so proud."
"Thank you, I'm very succesful."
"Well I shall have the pleasure of informing you that we have taken your mares and have exterminated the foals, your foals." He gave Alastair a slow, freakish grin.
Alastair flushed white with anger under his muddy dun, he gave no words but leaped at Mourir with all the anger and hatred over the years being released into his gigantic leap. His rippling muscles and bright, angry eyes were clear in the musky light. He cleared eight feet and landed in front of his father, hardly able to contain himself.
"You'll wish you hadn't."

Have to go.
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