Yes. I stumbled on that guess too.Mine has the same passage.
Ah, this makes a lot more sense.
What is with ‘bigoted workers’?
I did like the description of London as a factory with the West End as the finished product.
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Yes. I stumbled on that guess too.Mine has the same passage.
Ah, this makes a lot more sense.
I am going to enjoy this. Everyone else seems to have gone for something really solid & I get fixated on *light*Yes. I stumbled on that guess too.
What is with ‘bigoted workers’?
I did like the description of London as a factory with the West End as the finished product.
Oh I saw the light too (if you see what I mean), but it felt a bit ‘forced’ like she was doing a writing exercise. It did create the atmosphere very well.I am going to enjoy this. Everyone else seems to have gone for something really solid & I get fixated on *light*![]()
I knew you weren't imagining it, I was just pointing out that my brain was on a totally different path.I went back & did a quick count. She uses the word light 14 times in this 1st chapter ~ most in one paragraph. Then there are all the other allusions to lamps, & types of light so I'm not imagining things.
That's okay, go for it...I can already tell that I'm just going to be nodding my head a lot & thinking to myself...oh, I see that or wow, I would have never seen that...We will terrify others if we do that I think.![]()
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I was thinking sheltered, innocent of the realities of the world...so basically unschooled!Looking forward to everybody's thoughts & opinions.
I agree ~ though I was thinking it felt overworked ~ which it probably was. I am having trouble with her characters to start with. They all feel & sound a bit same/same so I am a bit muddled but that will probably sort out with time.Oh I saw the light too (if you see what I mean), but it felt a bit ‘forced’ like she was doing a writing exercise. It did create the atmosphere very well.
This is the interesting thing about doing a study with others. When my OB was about 7 I read him the opening parts of Gilgamesh, not expecting him to really grasp much of it @ all. He missed the straight storyline completely but understood the dream sequences extremely well. We each grasp hold of what we recognise & understand best.I knew you weren't imagining it, I was just pointing out that my brain was on a totally different path.![]()
Yes, everyone definitely has a different perspective on things & I believe that is mostly based on our experiences in life! Looking at your son's takeaway of what you read to him...the imagination of a child is such a wondrous & beautiful thing, I can see where he would have grasped the dream sequence!This is the interesting thing about doing a study with others. When my OB was about 7 I read him the opening parts of Gilgamesh, not expecting him to really grasp much of it @ all. He missed the straight storyline completely but understood the dream sequences extremely well. We each grasp hold of what we recognise & understand best.
I think Woolfe writes about water extremely well ~ but I live within sight & sound of water so recognise it immediately as true. For the same reason I am tuned into the nuances of light ~ especially light on water. I've avoided big cities all my life so tended to read over those descriptions as irrelevant & not worth my attention ~ which is probably not true taken in context but knowing how I read I can compensate & will reread if necessary.
Same here.That's okay, go for it...I can already tell that I'm just going to be nodding my head a lot & thinking to myself...oh, I see that or wow, I would have never seen that...![]()