MY ( draft ) Story of Eko The chicken.

[yankeedoodle300]

thank you!

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

Okay, I don't understand who's talking in the dialogue. It's all mixed up.

 

[yankeedoodle300]

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What do you mean by that?

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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What do you mean by that?

In Part 1. I can't figure out who's saying what.

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Eko the chick!

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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But the siblings are talking too.

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Part 4

The Hawk


I looked up,
A Dark shadow crossed over,

I seem to be the only Pullet who notices,
It Gets closer and closer,
The Older Hens seem worried,

Then they scream " Run Hawk, Run Hawk ! "
The Human is not near.

I Run for my Chicken life,
The others run as well,

A chick, called Izet , was picked up by the Great bird,
" Help Me! " Izet screamed " Heelllpppp M "

There was a silence,
Then I Squawked,
about 20 times.

That is why they call me Eko.

The Owner heard the Deafening
Squawks, and came out.

And Then there was a
Loud
BANG,
The Little Devil Fell from the air,
and Izet fell as well,

Finding out my friend was taken from
This earth was Horrible.

And Thus begins my life of adventures.

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

What exactly does Eko have to do with Squawking? Just wondering.

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Nothing. When ever she talks she does it a lot. Eko is a real chicken, She is in my backyard now! and she is telling the story from her point of view, and the other chickens talk to her.

 

[yankeedoodle300]

Part 5-10 is coming tomorrow! Please Subscribe! I Already did! Hope you like it! Like I said, Its more of a Poem than story.
Enjoy!