my poem

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by chicklover16, Aug 24, 2011.

  1. chicklover16

    chicklover16 queen of flirts

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    Yesterday me and my best friend wooingwyandotte wrote this verse:

    Life is bound by such short years
    Yet the rose of friendship blossoms for eternity
    Though the rose has its thorns and briers
    The blossom stays ever so sweet
    As is the rose of friendship
    And the thorns of strife
    Twisted together to form beautiful rose

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  2. WooingWyandotte

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  3. chicklover16

    chicklover16 queen of flirts

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    Quote:Hey! you helped write it!
     
  4. WooingWyandotte

    WooingWyandotte Overrun With Chickens

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    Quote:Hey! you helped write it!

    I did.....










    Didn't I?











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  5. chicklover16

    chicklover16 queen of flirts

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    Quote:Hey! you helped write it!

    I did.....










    Didn't I?











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    HA! Hey, I removed the * embarrassing*part [​IMG]
     
  6. chicklover16

    chicklover16 queen of flirts

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    no one likes it [​IMG]
     
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  7. WooingWyandotte

    WooingWyandotte Overrun With Chickens

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    Duh.
     
  8. Blonde

    Blonde Chillin' With My Peeps

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    that was a amazing poem!
     
  9. BovieVei

    BovieVei Chillin' With My Peeps

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    I liked it [​IMG]
     
  10. chicklover16

    chicklover16 queen of flirts

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    yay! [​IMG]
     

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