my story

Discussion in 'Games, Jokes, and Fun!' started by bella1210, Sep 11, 2011.

  1. bella1210

    bella1210 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 10, 2010
    ct
    ok so i am going to try to make a story i am making the thread now so people will know about it but i will try to get it up today or tommorw the first part but i do not know how good it will be because i have never witten a good story before if i am coping any of you just tell me and i will fix it.

    this will be the smile i use when i make a new part [​IMG]

    if you would like to be a follower just tell me with a color

    followers

    DinosRBirds
    iheartchicks<3[​IMG]

    story pages

    part 1-page 1
     
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  2. DinosRBirds

    DinosRBirds Hunted by Moonlight

    Feb 1, 2011
    Lake Huron,MI
    Quote:Me blue.
     
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  3. Iheartchicks<3:)

    Iheartchicks<3:) Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 1, 2010
    Mount Vernon, WA
    Fuschia! :)
     
  4. bella1210

    bella1210 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 10, 2010
    ct
    [​IMG]

    this is just the begging so it is not to good and sorry for that cliff hanger also sorry for how short it is

    Bella was just walking down a hallway to go to her room when she saw an odd figure. “that could be be a ghost” she said to her self. Then she went to go find it and it was gone. That is when It all started. She tryied telling her mom dad and sisters and brothers but they said she was crazy and was imaging things. So she keep searching and could never find it but kept seeing it for slim amount of time every time she saw it.
     
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  5. Iheartchicks<3:)

    Iheartchicks<3:) Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 1, 2010
    Mount Vernon, WA
    Quote:Maybe more detail? [​IMG] [​IMG]
     
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  6. bella1210

    bella1210 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 10, 2010
    ct
    Iheartchicks<3[​IMG] :

    Fuschia! :)

    that color is not working​
     
  7. Iheartchicks<3:)

    Iheartchicks<3:) Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 1, 2010
    Mount Vernon, WA
    Quote:that color is not working

    hot pink
     
  8. bella1210

    bella1210 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 10, 2010
    ct
    Iheartchicks<3[​IMG] :

    Quote:Maybe more detail? [​IMG] [​IMG]

    i will go try to add somemore details also dose anyone know what i should call the story​
     
  9. Iheartchicks<3:)

    Iheartchicks<3:) Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 1, 2010
    Mount Vernon, WA
    Quote:Maybe more detail? [​IMG] [​IMG]

    i will go try to add somemore details also dose anyone know what i should call the story

    Did you see how i changed it?

    And i need more of the story before i could title it.
     
  10. bella1210

    bella1210 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jul 10, 2010
    ct
    Iheartchicks<3[​IMG] :

    Quote:i will go try to add somemore details also dose anyone know what i should call the story

    Did you see how i changed it?

    And i need more of the story before i could title it.​

    i did see i just add more to it and tried to add some details
     
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