New Role-Play Input

Should I Start a New Role-Play?

  • Yes

    Votes: 9 75.0%
  • No

    Votes: 3 25.0%

  • Total voters
    12
The chips sound a lot like the Mark of the Beast. Pretty cool thinking behind it, but I see a few errors.
Having children is usually a social event, and people can have family all over the U.S. or even the world. It would probably be easier to knock everyone out at once. Since they have robots that can function while they are out, it wouldn't be too economically devastating. I mean, the work of the entire American people is worth a lot $$$. Even if its just for an hour. Some planes would crash, along with buses, and cars. So it would probably be best to do it at night. This wouldn't completely prevent those casualties, but it would reduce it.

Memories begin to form about age 2, so it might be best to implant the chip at that time or slightly before.

I think the 'chipped' adults would be better for the workforce. They would work in perfect unison, losing no time, and always working at top efficiency. The chips will have to turn off when they get off work, though. Else they wouldn't buy anything.

Maybe the kids could be militants or special forces?

Good idea. I didn't thing about that. Well, I thought it would be better if they were kids because then they can work for longer before they die or can't work anymore. There still are jobs in the US, like doctors, etc., but the manufacturing jobs are what they would need the children for. Is that what you mean?
 
Good idea. I didn't thing about that. Well, I thought it would be better if they were kids because then they can work for longer before they die or can't work anymore. There still are jobs in the US, like doctors, etc., but the manufacturing jobs are what they would need the children for. Is that what you mean?
Hmm, I didn't think about that. Aren't they 'chipping' the adults in order to steal the kids? Or are the kids the ones that grow up with the chips?
 
So, I have had the idea for a new RP for a long time now, but I've been hesitant to post it. As you probably know, a lot of awesome new RPs have been coming out recently. I've seen lots of people post in these, saying that they'd love to join but that they were already in over their heads with other RP and couldn't (I've done it myself, but recently things have slowed down, so I saw my chance to maybe post this RP). I just wanted to know if anyone out there would join this RP if I posted it. It's got an interesting dystopian theme/story.

Backstory:

It is America in the future, the year 2134. All Americans live in 156 super-cities, miles and miles of concrete jungles. In the biggest (such as New York, Washington D.C., etc.), it would take over a week to drive from side to side at the thinnest points. In this future society, the American government is... broke. It doesn't have the money to have enough machines/robots built to work in factories, build things, etc. So someone in the government comes up with an evil plan...
Everyone in America has a chip in the back of their neck, connected to their nervous system/brain. Everyone, that is, except certain bands of "revolutionaries", if you will, people who have invented clever ways to trick the system into believing they still have their chips. These revolutionaries are very clever and hard to track. The chips are installed at age 1 1/2 and kept until you pass away at exactly age 85. Completely painless, don't worry. The revolutionaries have secret locations, secretly trained surgeons that will remove the chip from people ages 5 to, well, 84. These chips are used for paying for things, personal identification, etc. All good things, I assure you. But they can also be used to track people, and for... personal identification. You can keep no secrets from the government.
The "evil plan" that I mentioned earlier is this: In one out of every twenty neighborhoods in America, the military will use special guns that send electrical bolts into the chips at the base of the inhabitants' necks, knocking them unconscious. They then will enter these houses and take the unconscious children with them. The parents will wake up not remembering that they ever had children and will continue life as normal. No one will ask questions; just remember, it is far too easy to make people forget. The children will be transported to special facilities where they will... forget about their previous lives. There will also be a little brainwashing involved. All these children will know is their first names, their ages, and that they have a serious disease. If any sunlight touches their skin, they will get horrible rashes, EXTREMELY high grade fevers, and they will die. No doctors can save them. But the government has decided to help them, and now they live in ENORMOUS industrial warehouses in every city. But they have to work to earn their keep. This is America's new workforce.
Don't forget, though, that the Revolutionaries don't have chips.


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I feel like I should have some input...but I don't. This looks great, and definitely different!
As Fanci said, it really reminds me of the Mark of The Beast that Revelation foretells. I'd be extremely interested to see how this forms and goes! :D
 

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