Nix's Art Classroom•Anime/semi-realistic people•

[bella1210]

here is the lesson i know it is not good but i have never done anime before

here is the eyes

here is the mouth

here is the face

here is the nose

 

[bella1210]

here is the first Assignments i am new so i did not do it yet so here it is

 

[ChickLover98]

Nix are you going to grade us?

 

[equinehugger3]

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Please?

 

[Quinn4321]

OK, I did do it, BUT I wont be able to upload it until Sun or Mon.

sorry...

 

[NixNoodleNumbat]

Okay, sorry about the lack of grading. I will do it soon. Lessons will be added every second week, the thread with the full reasons is linked in my siggy.

 

[LeBlackbird]

How's everything going?

Personally, I think we need to do a lesson on Hair, since that seems to be many people's strong point and it's always fun to be creative with it

 

[Quinn4321]

heres my assignment. late... I know, sorry.

 

[NixNoodleNumbat]

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The pictures aren't showing up on my computer.

 

[NixNoodleNumbat]

Feedback and grades for assignment 2:
Chickenfur:
Full face: I like the face shape and the eyes! Although, the eyes are pointing in slightly opposite directions and the chin idicates that the head is turned one way, the nose the other, it was a good picture with obvious effort.
Fragments of the face: Good job! I don't have much to say, but I like it!
Grade: B+
ChickenLover98:
Full face: The hair is nice. The eyes are good, but I suggest you make the outsides curved. Make sure the eyes are halfway down the face. Another suggestion is to just leave the ears blank. The chin, I think, is a bit long for anime. I like the clean lines!
Fragments of the face: Although there is still room for improvement, good job! My favourite is the nose on the right. Once again, nice, clean lines!
Grade: B-
equinehugger3:
Fragments of the face: THAT IS TOTALLY AWESOME!!! Good job. I really like it! This half of the assignment gets an A.
Full face: This is good, but a bit of a let-down compared to the rest of the assignment. The eyes are uneven, too far apart and not halfway down the face. The face shape is realistic, not anime.
Grade: B
(I like that other picture you did, BTW)
Bella1210:
A general message from me: Bella, I can tell you are less experienced and/or younger than us. Good job for not letting that hold you back! I know that if you put the effort in you can become a great artist!
Full face: The mouth is a nice, classic anime mouth. The nose, although contradictory to the direction of the face, is, like the mouth, classic simple anime. The eyes are good cartoon eyes, but not exactly anime-y.
Fragments of the face: Like I said before, the eyes are more cartoon than anime. I like the first mouth the others are okay. The first nose isn't exactly a normal nose, but it could be a clown nose! The second one looks upside down, but if you flipped it the other way around, it would be great!
Grade: C
Quinn4321:
Full face: The hair is cool. Maybe the mouth could be moved upwards so the chin can be shortened. The face is inclined in one direction except the ear, which should be on the other side. The eyes are alright. The nose is very anime.
Fragments: The eyes are alright. You might want to consider adding highlights. The first nose is more cartoon than anime, but the other two are nice. The mouths are nice, simple classic anime.
Grade: B
ETA: the next assignment will be posted on Thursday.