Of Feathers And Flames- A Wings of Fire AU RP

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-Kiwi- said:
A little more separation between PARAGRAFFS would be nice, spacing between dialogue, indentation etc because it’s just the tiniest bit too blended together, and- maybe it’s just a me thing but I start reading too fast and missing details and stuff if there’s no clear spacing. Other than that it’s perfect :) you’re probably the best writer here Cap
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Gotcha, gotcha. I find myself paragraphing everything, and I thought maybe it was too much, and choppy- but I will work on that, thank you for the feedback, it tis much appreciated.
And indentation doesn't really work with BYC... At least, not easily. 🙄🤨 I am NOT manually spacing, absolutely refuse- ☠️✋
Well, thank you Kiwi, I'm not sure about that 🤣, but I appreciate hearing it. Thank you.
 
guess who's alive...... surprising ik lol!
after i finish a game with a friend, i'll come to write my parts w apple, bamboo, neoma, and blackout! can someone kinda tell me the locations? I know neoma/steel is in the Den still, but not for long (hehehehe) i just need a teeny refresher on the exact location of the others! thx for y'all being patient while i get settled into work and all that stuff!!!! <3
 
Harmonylight said:
guess who's alive...... surprising ik lol!
after i finish a game with a friend, i'll come to write my parts w apple, bamboo, neoma, and blackout! can someone kinda tell me the locations? I know neoma/steel is in the Den still, but not for long (hehehehe) i just need a teeny refresher on the exact location of the others! thx for y'all being patient while i get settled into work and all that stuff!!!! <3
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Yay!!! Let me dig up your last posts with ABB...
 
Harmonylight said:
Blackout helped look around, searching intently. His mind spun with thoughts of the flight here. He and Austin had worked together, and it had actually felt nice.
He shook his head again. He had to remind himself not to get sucked in. This was how Austin operated.
Draw others in with a fake facade, pretend to care and be kind, but then yank the rug from underneath later.
It was a well practiced scheme. He had done it many times.
Blackout blinked. He was getting distracted.
He heard wingbeats in the distance, and looked up. It was a red and green Rainwing. It was definitely Apple, but as she landed, he could tell she was angry and hurt. He cast back and realized he wasn't too far off- her untrained scales painted anger and disgust all over herself.
"Apple- are you okay?" He said quietly. He wasn't trying to draw attention to her, but she loudly snapped, "The limo is over there. Get there quick and figure out what it is you want, okay?"
He winced. Attention was definitely now drawn to her.
"Apple, what-"
"No. Just go okay?" Apple responded, a bitter edge to her tone. "And if my brother is still hunched over some stupid human, kick his tail and get him working for me. I'm going back to the oasis. I'll meet you all there."
With that she took off in the direction of the clearing, Blackout looking after her. He was slightly stung from her harsh words, but not for himself; he had heard and received much worse.
No, he was more hurt on behalf of Bamboo.
"Uh- I- Um- Ok." He muttered to himself, trying to right things in his head again.
"Guys, the Rainwings found the limo and want us to go over there... I think." He said, trying to force a light edge to his tone.
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Geez luhweeez. Reading through you posts is like drinking straight caffeine.

I believe this is your last post, Harmony.
Legit SO hyped to hear what happens with Nemoa.
 
Harmonylight said:
Steel stepped through the spot where a wall had previously been, blinking in the sunlight. Alora kept a hand on her neck, walking through and gently guiding her.
"It's alright, just keep moving forward...." Alora murmured softly, as people began staring at the silvery dragon and blue-haired girl stepping through.
"Where are we?" Steel responded, keeping her head low and avoiding the eyes.
"Pick up your head. Look people in the eyes, and stay expressionless. Don't appear broken. Show you're in control," Alora said, holding her own head high and shoulders back. She appeared relaxed and confident as whispers floated around them.
Steel took a deep breath and lifted her deep blue-purple eyes, gazing at the people around her. Her head rose as well, and she fixed an unconcerned expression on her face.
Alora stopped, and Steel followed her lead, looking up and around her. She was in an arena. They were in an area that looked like it was used for fighting.
Growls.
Anger.
A small dragon, staring at her in an arena like this one.
Whispers of a rebellion.
Steel shook her head, and her mind snapped out of cloudy memories. She swayed on her talons, and Alora looked at her, concerned.
"Steel...?" She muttered, a worried edge to her voice.
Steel closed her eyes tightly and focused on breathing. "I remember being somewhere like this and fighting.... I think."
"Ah. So you're that one..." Alora responded quietly. "Yeah, I watched you on the TV in my dad's lab... you put up an insane fight."
Steel looked at her out of the corner of her eyes but stayed silent. She would ask her more about that later.
"Now, we're in the arena. Time for us to practice flying. Fly then!" Alora commanded.
Steel glared at her. "Uh- do not tell me what to do."
Alora laughed. "I know, but I wanted to see what you'd do. You're the first Lunarwing I've interacted with in my 18 years... Gotta see how you'll act, right?"
Steel rolled her eyes but allowed herself a chuckle before spreading her wings and winking at the small girl. "You might not make it past these 18 years if you're not careful." She took off, leaving a small plume of dust in her wake and smirking inwardly as she heard the blue-haired human cough and respond with a loud "Really?!"
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Aaaand maybe the last Nemo post??
 

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