Photo Critique Club

[PippinTheChicken]

 

[PippinTheChicken]

 

[PippinTheChicken]

 

[PippinTheChicken]

 

[PippinTheChicken]

 

[PippinTheChicken]

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[azurbanclucker]

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1. Overall not bad, but too much negative space. Should be zoomed in to really fill the frame with chicken.
2. Missed the focus, too much negative space.
3. Missed the focus, sharpest point is nostrils/comb, and wattle. Also too dark.

 

[azurbanclucker]

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1. Focus is forward of the eyes. The blown out white spot over the chick is visually distracting.
2. Focus is pretty good here. There's an odd red eye artifact that you could correct but overall this isn't really a bad shot.
3. Focused forward again. White spot again.

 

[azurbanclucker]

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1. Focus is off and needs to be zoomed in.
2. I don't like the composition on this one. Whole right side is chicken, and it's distracting when her head is so small comparatively and SHOULD be the focal point of the image.
3. Too much foreground clutter.

 

[azurbanclucker]

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1. Bad crop. Bad angle. You need to be down more and get more of her eye.
2. This doesn't work for me at all. Is the main subject an egg? Is it her? Hard to tell and you don't see her face at all.
3. Crop in to put the right girl in the right lower corner and get rid of that distracting red leg band.