Photo Critique Club

[azurbanclucker]

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1. Same as the first set. Too much negative space.
2. The branch in the center pulled your focus to it, both visually, and mechanically. It's the sharpest point in your image and is distracting.
3. Frizzle butt is the main focal point here. It just overpowers the head. Probably need to crop it down and get the focus pushed more to the right.

 

[PippinTheChicken]

1. Overall not bad, but too much negative space. Should be zoomed in to really fill the frame with chicken.
2. Missed the focus, too much negative space.
3. Missed the focus, sharpest point is nostrils/comb, and wattle. Also too dark.

 

[PippinTheChicken]

1. Focus is forward of the eyes. The blown out white spot over the chick is visually distracting.
2. Focus is pretty good here. There's an odd red eye artifact that you could correct but overall this isn't really a bad shot.
3. Focused forward again. White spot again.

 

[azurbanclucker]

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Now you can see the focus is off

 

[PippinTheChicken]

1. Bad crop. Bad angle. You need to be down more and get more of her eye.
2. This doesn't work for me at all. Is the main subject an egg? Is it her? Hard to tell and you don't see her face at all.
3. Crop in to put the right girl in the right lower corner and get rid of that distracting red leg band.

 

[PippinTheChicken]

1. Same as the first set. Too much negative space.
2. The branch in the center pulled your focus to it, both visually, and mechanically. It's the sharpest point in your image and is distracting.
3. Frizzle butt is the main focal point here. It just overpowers the head. Probably need to crop it down and get the focus pushed more to the right.

 

[PippinTheChicken]

I may be able to take more pics today. Going to focus on my silkies.

 

[azurbanclucker]

I may be able to take more pics today. Going to focus on my silkies.

critiquing a dozen at a time is a challenge. Just sayin'

 

[azurbanclucker]

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too much

 

[PippinTheChicken]

critiquing a dozen at a time is a challenge. Just sayin'

Don't worry, I won't be able to get many good photos, my silkies are skittish.
The only silkie who isn't skittish, is a little bit ugly