Poem input

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by Littlecimarron18, Feb 6, 2008.

  1. Littlecimarron18

    Littlecimarron18 Chillin' With My Peeps

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    Jan 3, 2008
    Colorado
    sooooo i love to write poetry...
    and i just wrote this. Input would be super helpful!


    Life comes at you fast,
    but another new day awaits.
    Things change, people change,
    Pages turn.
    But all the same,
    I cant stop looking back.
    and wouldnt have noticed the changes
    if i hadn't been looking back.
    They say live day to day,
    Impossible.
    Look forward but remember the past.
    Take action now,
    so you can remember it later.
    by,
    the all famous..
    SAKO NAKITO!!


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  2. Stormhorse23

    Stormhorse23 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Aug 22, 2007
    Indiana
    at first was was like "what?" then i read every little detail and its really great. i write poems too! i should post one of mine....
     
    Last edited: Feb 6, 2008

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