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I'm pleased you like them.Great stories! I haven't gotten a chance to read all of them yet, but I love the first story's first person (or chicken, rather) concept with a punch of behavioral insight to tie it all together. It reminded me a little of Richard Adams. Have you read Plague Dogs?
I can see why you didn't write Cheepy's story the same way... pretty difficult to put yourself inside the mind of a chicken that doesn't know "how to chicken"... but it might make an even more engaging read for that very reason.
Keep writing!! You definitely have a keen eye for observation and a great voice as a writer.
There are a few written in the first person. Sometimes I just can't find the imagination to make this work. Other stories are fleshed out diary entries. While the stories are the heart of the book, I draw on the stories as 'evidence' for some fairly serious comment regarding chicken behavior at the end of the book.