~Story~ A New Home- a hen discovers A good life (Chapter 11 FINALLY!!)

[chickenlover91]

You better be happy its a LOOONG one

Chapter 9
I can’t just die

Just when I was about to give up hope of life, I remembered something. “I can’t just give up!” I thought to myself. “I have the best brother in the world and an outstanding BCF!” “What would they say if I just gave up, I have no right to do that to them!” I said to myself as I tried to stand up. But just as I stood up I was quickly pecked back down to the ground by Drizella. I screamed in pain. I could barely speak, just moans came out of my mouth, but I was not the only dying chicken in our cage, Fluffy was also bleeding out and dying. Savannah and Kayli didn’t know what to do, they knew that if they tried to help us that they would be next! But Louise didn’t care; she came to me and Fluffy and said “is there anything I can do for you?” “I-I’m cold” I barely could even utter out those words. Louise then came up to me and laid next to my bloody, cold body, giving me her body warmth. I had to keep reminding myself “Don’t fall asleep, don’t fall asleep!” Thankfully Drizella, had fallen asleep so she did not get mad at Louise for helping me. Then finally the Human with the big white suit (the food man) came and gave us food! I could barely walk over to were the food was, but when I got there boy was that food good! We were all fighting to get to the food bowl because not all 7 of us could eat in that small space at once. But then I noticed that someone wasn’t getting up for food, Fluffy! “Fluffy are you ok?” I quickly asked hoping for an answer. But there was none. “Fluffy!” I yelled. And then I saw one of her eyes open. “Fluffy!” I yelled once more. But she just sat there in her pile of blood, looking at me. “Fluffy, please say something!” I tweeted in doubt. But then I heard a small whisper “Where am I?” fluffy asked. “You are in…” but I stopped there and then said “you are with me.” “Who are you?” she calmly asked. “I’m Henny, remember me?” I said as tears started dripping down my cheeks, on to my wattles, and then on to the bloody floor of the small, dark, cold cage. “Don’t give up!” I said, as she slowly started closing her eyes “No!” I tweeted. I laid next to her like Louise had laid next to me, and slept with her. I wasn’t even worried about eating like the other chickens; all I wanted to do was comfort my dying friend. Even if I did die, I would be honored to do it next to Fluffy.

 

[chickenlover91]

Please tell me you like it!?!?!

 

[Harli50]

it was soooooo sad
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[trainfullachickens14]

So far, every single human in this story has been a complete and total SORRY EXCUSE FOR A

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JERK!!!!! Those idiots just sat there and LAUGHED at Drizella MURDERING the other chicks and LAUGHED at them having no food FOR A WEEK!!!!!

These kind of people make me sick to my stomach!

They treat millions of chickens a year like DIRT for 1 1/2 years, (if they SURVIVE that long) then they kill them!

They need to be locked up in prison for animal cruelty...ALL OF THEM!!!!! (unless there are some who have been trying to be nice to these poor chickens who, by the MILLIONS are being treated like CHICKEN TURD!!!!!) Something needs to be done!
(P.S. sorry for my covered-up cuss, but I hate this kind of people AT LEAST that much! I would be more profound, but this is BYC; and BYC is to good of a place for that!)

 

[firetrucksrule]

 

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[chickenlover91]

This story is to show ppl that dont know what a battery cage chickens life is like, what a battery cage chickens life is like! Thats alot of crying faces! Well goodnight peeps new chapters to come in the morning!!

 

[TechnoCat]

I love it!
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!
Oh, I forgot to say that there's a new chapter up.

 

[chickenlover91]

Chapter 10
A second chance

It was in the middle of the night, all the chickens were sleeping, I was still lying next to fluffy. I was then awoken by a bright light; it was a small, beautiful, white bantam chicken! Her feathers looked like soft, fluffy cotton, and her eyes were gorgeous! She had a strange, but pretty poof on her head. And then she spoke “Do not be afraid, my name is Lilly (The flower lily is a symbol of innocence; purity and beauty.)” “ha-have you come to take my dear friend to heaven?” I slowly asked. “If it were not for you, then yes, I would be.” Lilly said in her soft, beautiful voice. “What do you mean?” I asked. “You have shown true love for your friend, willing to give your own life for her, so she will now be given another chance.” “Really!” I said excitedly. “Yes, but this gift will be taken once you take your last breath. When you die, she will also. She will not be healed in here brain for a long time, yet her physical wounds will heal, once her mental wounds are healed, she will leave you, you will never see her again.” Lilly said. “You mean she will die?” I asked. “No, she will just be taken from your sight, she will only die once you die.” Then Lilly took a sharp knife and sliced the top of her head, three drops of blood quickly dropped down on Fluffys cold, stiff body, I looked down on my dear friend and she was still not healed. I looked up to ask the angel, Lilly one more question, but she was gone. “Was I just dreaming?” I thought to myself.

 

[chickenlover91]

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