pictures are very hard to get the actually quality of the bird. The photo you share to me was of a nice Sumatra. Congrats on the Reserve in Show that is an honor especially at a young age. The photo of my Sumatra is not the best because she is holding her tail low. She actually won RIS and Champion Large fowl of the junior show at the show and 3 long time judges expressed their liking of her. Congrats againWell we all have an opinion, and I will leave things like length from a picture, or birds mood out. Zach does have a good hen, but If I judge the bird in the picture, I'd say that the legs are too short, the tail is too low, wings too low, feathers too soft, and the breast flat. But it is hard to judge if it is in a lazy mood, especially the tail angle, wing carriage, and leg length. The bird I shared received ovations from many judges at that show which would not be the "opinion" of one judge, because of her willingness to fan her tail, which looks just like the bird pictured in quote of yours, non stop from morning till the champion judging in the evening. I'm glad though that you shared your opinion as well as both judges.
PS. To make things a little confusing, my name is also Zach.
Zachary