Tails Of Golden Feather- A rooster who has survived all odds

[trainfullachickens14]

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(can I be a fan?)

 

[Chicken Frenzie]

Cool.

 

[TechnoCat]

Chapter 13

"Yeah, it's me."
"What are you doing here?"
"Trying to change. I guess I've been a little weird lately..." She sighed.
"Don't try to change just for me. Change because YOU want to."
"I've noticed my attitude. And I'm going to change it." Her soft blue eyes burned a hole in the night. "I liked it when we were younger. Funnier, happier, and we didn't think about much. But now..." She sighed again. "I guess I'm just getting old."
"We are only 10 months old. You're not old yet."
"I guess so." I took a long look at her. She was perched up higher than I was, her golden feathers striking out against the stars. Her eyes were satin blue, and shone so bright they made the moon seem so dull. A flare of sadness passed through her eyes, and her gaze locked on mine.
I could now see the old Lilith in her.
Her eyes became written with the words I'm sorry...
I remembered my vow, that I no longer carried.
I'll protect you with every last drop of blood running through my body...
There in the cold night, with the breeze blowing, I saw something stir. Must have been Lilith the Dog.
And then, Lilith The Chicken came down and nestled beside me, and placed her head on the spot where my wing began.
Then I silently made that same vow to myself.
Lilith, I'll protect you with every last drop of blood running through my body...
And somewhere in the back of my mind, I heard Lilith's cotton soft voice saying,
I'll always be here for you...
I looked down at her. She looked up at me. She smiled.
Things were going a little better.
Then I heard a screech and barking, and my blood froze then and there.

 

[TechnoCat]

Chapter 14

"Lilith?"
Something was wrong. Wrong was everywhere.
"Lilith? Do you hear me?"
No response.
"Lilith!?" This time I couldn't hide the sobs in my voice. "Please! Get up!"
Too late... Came the silent reply too late...
One more tear fell from my eyes.
I was tired of loss.
It was everywhere.
I couldn't avoid it.
I was sick of the tears.
Everyday I found a war against myself.
"Lilith..." I said one more time. "Lilith..." I said it again and again.
"Sage?" Lilith was crying, too. "I-I think we need to get out of here."
"What makes you say that?" I tried to hide the shuddering in my voice.
"Look." Her voice wobbled. She inched closer to me on the branch.
A hawk, it's eyes glowing and cunning.
It spread its wings and flew off.
"It's gone."
"No! It's not! Look behind you!" Lilith flew upward. I quickly turned. I raked my talons along its brown chest.
"Scree!" It screeched. It shot upward.
"Look out!" Lilith screeched. It came back down, blood dripping down its feathers. I turned and pushed it out of the air with my talons, but its talons caught my foot.
"Sage!" Lilith cried.
I was falling, falling. I couldn't do anything about it.
I hit the ground, and all I remembered was the scent of sweet green grass and blood.
I heard Lilith's war screech.
"Stay away!" Her voice was so powerful I didn't even recognize it as her own. She gave one more war screech, took off from the tree, and landed in front of the hawk. "Stay away! Keep your distance!"
The hawk gave a screech, then it was Lilith the attacker.
I was getting weaker.
Lilith's war screeches were the only things keeping me awake.
"Screeeee!" The hawk took off.
I couldn't stay awake much longer.
"Lilith?"
"I'm here." She said, panting and blood smearing her gold feathers. "I'll never leave again."
A zap of electricity passed through my body.
A flare of sadness flew through Lilith's tear stained, satin eyes. "I'm right here." She repeated, softer this time.
I saw the old Lilith in her.
I blacked out, remembering the sweet scent of the grass, and the scent of twilight.

 

[TechnoCat]

I guess all my fans are gone...

 

[AnimalsComeFirst]

Nice job. Don't worry, your fans are here. I am writing a book as well, its in my signature - if you wanna check it out. Anyways, at first I thought only 2 people were reading it because they were the only people to comment, but I asked how many people are here reading and I got a lot of responses. Even if nobody comments, don't think nobody isn't reading and liking your story.

to a fellow author on BYC!

 

[Gomes Bantams]

Holy Bantam! This story rocks!

 

[Harli50]

More!!

 

[Mahonri]

agreed. MORE.

 

[TechnoCat]

I just wanna stop and say thanks to everyone who is reading. It's been awesome support. I used to think I wasn't a good author, but now, since I've joined BYC it's been really good encouragement. It's telling me, Wow, I guess I really am good at what I love. I will continue this story for awhile, and I promise there's no end in sight to my story writing. Thank you all SO much.

You all rock my chicken loving world.