"The day my world turned upside down" story

[AnimalsComeFirst]

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I'll write more later, gotta string lights on the christmas tree then decorate it, then make dinner, then read the daily reading from a christmas advent book... and so on!

 

[Symphony]

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No, we're talking about the wild flock that Buddy first met Goldie in. Nobody can cure them because they're wild.

Right.

 

[RingedTeal]

 

[AnimalsComeFirst]

"What!" I screeched! Buddy frantically ran over to Gracie and sniffed around. "We brought them in! Me and you! I remember putting them down on a bale of hay!! They have GOT to be here somewhere!" Buddy barked urgently! I, as a hunting dog, did what I did best. I sniffed, I sniffed and.... "I got their scent!!" Buddy and Gracie looked at me excitedly and wagged their tails. I followed the trail until it led to.... the door. "They went outside?! How could they? They know better than to wander in the snow!" Gracie said. "Maybe they DIDN'T mean to go out.... maybe something... or someone dragged them out!" Buddy said logically. "How could we of not seen?" Gracie asked to no one in particular. During all this contemplating and arguing, the black rooster just sat and watched. I suddenly had a logical explanation, and looked at the rooster with eyes that questioned him. "What?" He asked, feeling like he was a piece of meat about to be attacked. "Have you seen them? The puppys? Did they escape?" I said doubtfully. "No! I didn't see anything... if I did, why wouldn't I be telling you? We're friends, right?" He said defensively. I stared at him, contemplating on whether to continue the questioning or go search in the snow for the pups. As all this happened, Buddy and Gracie searched every inch of the shed, with no results. "They must of went outside." Gracie determined sadly. So with a sigh from tiredness, I trotted out into the ice cold snow, the wind whipped right through my fur, making me shudder. I sighed from tiredness because it was 3 AM in the morning, but at that time I had no idea of the time, or day, or holiday. So on the snowy Christmas night, I searched the ditches and crevices for the 2 lost puppies. I was determined not to go back until I found them... alive or dead.

 

[Ukiah]

Good job, this is (literally) the only story I have been able to read with out zoning out into lala land.
I hate reading. The books I have to read for school are so boring, But this, this is so interesting..

Continue please! BTW I'm silently here, reading, but not commenting

You have a bigger audience
than it seems!

 

[AnimalsComeFirst]

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Thank you so much! That really means alot to me. When I was little, I always used to write storys. Now that I am older, I read them and I laugh at my spelling and the way I phrased things... but I have always liked reading and writing.. I just never "wrote" a big book before. In fact, I thought nobody would like this one because I have posted 3 other stories on here and nobody has commented. But I guess I have have to believe that you guys are here and like it, whether you comment or not. Thanks again, I appreciate any feedback at all, good or bad.
Who knows, someday maybe i'll publish this book.

 

[featherfinder]

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Thank you so much! That really means alot to me. When I was little, I always used to write storys. Now that I am older, I read them and I laugh at my spelling and the way I phrased things... but I have always liked reading and writing.. I just never "wrote" a big book before. In fact, I thought nobody would like this one because I have posted 3 other stories on here and nobody has commented. But I guess I have have to believe that you guys are here and like it, whether you comment or not. Thanks again, I appreciate any feedback at all, good or bad.
Who knows, someday maybe i'll publish this book.

Go for it! The worst they can say is no and give you feed back on what to do better. Then you try again!

 

[AnimalsComeFirst]

Being a hunting dog meant I had a small fur coat, shorthaired, not meant for the cold. When I was with the mean man who made me hunt animals, he used to put a coat on me that kept me warm in the snow. So as I trudged through the snow, a blizzard beginning to form, I thought about all my friends I had lost. Goldie, Nellie (whom I killed, but didn't mean too.... I still feel bad about it.), Cody and many more of which I cannot think of. Why was I out here, gonna die in this stupid storm? Why wasn't I back at the shed, cuddled up to Buddy and Gracie, not worrying what happens to the pups? "Those stupid puppies can find their own way home!" I angrily thought to myself. But a tiny voice in my head said, You're rescuing them because you love them. They're puppies, the don't know any better than to walk out in the storm. You are doing it for Buddy and Gracie, for they would surely die if they attempted to walk into this snowy blizzard. You have to do it. I sighed, why do those tiny voices always have to be right? So many questions... I snapped back to the present as I came to a road. Surely the pups couldn't of gone this far? But the scent that still was in my nose told me to keep going and follow the trail. Up ahead, I heard small yips and barks! "TUCKER!! DELILAH!! PUPPIES!!!!" I howled frantically! Even if they were out there, barking to me, the wind drowned their calls of despair. Suddenly I saw them! My heart skipped a beat.... up ahead, by a ice cold river a fox held one puppy in his mouth and the other under his paws. Delilah was in his mouth... and she was dead.

 

[featherfinder]

 

[SunnyCalifornia]

I hate foxes!!!

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