The Secrets of the Experiments

Is this a good RP?

  • Yes

    Votes: 16 38.1%
  • No

    Votes: 11 26.2%
  • Maybe

    Votes: 1 2.4%
  • i don't know yet, I'll have to see

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Mark kept ahold of her hand as they left the area. He was starting to feel faint and slowed to a stop then looked down at the many cuts on him. His adrenaline was wearing off by then

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"Good, it's about time he stood trial for his wife's murder" Pat said and sighed, reaching up to rub her forehead

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Chilali took a hold of his hand and smiled up at him from her seat as Jean finished washing the dishes

Sara looked at him "Are you ok?' she asked
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The chief nodded "We've been looking for him for a long time, but he some how snuck away from us" he said
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Jason then kissed CHilali's cheek.


(goodnight)

(Aww night :( )
 
(I'm making a drawing called a "Geometric Eye' or other known as "The Toroid Mandala" . Skip to 20:18 to see what I'm trying to create https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkCakDslpXM.)

The guards nodded and went to get Viveka
RADICAAAAAAAAL. Seriously. I say radical instead of "cool" and "awesome")

Viveka heard them comming and stood up to meET the guards at the door.
 
Sara looked at him "Are you ok?' she asked
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The chief nodded "We've been looking for him for a long time, but he some how snuck away from us" he said
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Jason then kissed CHilali's cheek.



(Aww night :( )
Mark looked to Sara then stopped and leaned against a tree "I will be. Just too much blood loss"

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Pat looked down at her hands. She had helped Mark to hide often, though she hadn't known cops were after him, just his father.

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Chilali smiled and kissed his cheek also
 
(Sorry, if I seem slow. I'm working on something that has to do with drawing)

Ben looked at her with a smile "I see you like art" he said looking at the sketching on the wall and ceiling.


Ben rolled his eyes "Ok then" he said
even though it was a true story Ben's tone made Addy think that it was just a dream "it might have just been a dream..."
 
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Fallow reached out to pull the jewelry off the shelf and glanced at the cashier to make sure he wasn’t looking. She had stolen several times. But for her it never got easier. Each time she felt worse. She pulled back her sleeve to look at the fresh burn that started at her shoulder and went down her arm. She knew the man would do worse to her if she didn’t get him what he wanted. Quickly pulling the necklace off the shelf she slipped out of the nearest door that led her into a desolated alley.

(I posted this four pages ago. Please respond...)
"What is he doing?" Amy asked the scientist.


The scientist looked at her "Testing the blood for any thing that might hurt the wolf from inside" he said.


 
"oh yeah i did actually starve for like 3 days when an orphanage didn't accept me and the other got to full" Addy said hoping he would believe her 


Ben looked at her "You look fine to me" he said as he rolled his eyes.

The wolf looked up at Amy. "His name's Hero." Amy announced as she gave the wolf something to eat. She leaned close to the wolf and whispered something to him softly. Then she laid her head down on his thin body.
 
Name: Fallow
(She doesn’t really have a name yet. The man she lives with calls her “Girl”. After getting experimented on she decides to call herself Fallow after the animal she becomes.)
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Charm: Fallow Deer
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History: She grew up with two supporting parents who loved her very much. When night while she slept someone broke into the house, and took her away. She was only four then. The man was a thief and murderer. He took Fallow to small cabin hidden in the woods where she grew for the next fourteen years. When she first arrived at the cabin the man told her to steal some food for him from a local food mart. Fallow, although she was four, refused to be too good hearted. The man beat her back with a whip many times before he locked her away in a room for a week, without giving her food or water. Weak, and hungry Fallow did what he ask, which was steal for him, although she put a fight every time until he broke her spirit by whipping her, or doing some other cruel act to her. When she asked him what he had done, and why she was there he said he had been locked up in jail for murder, and theft, and used her to steal for him so that he wouldn’t get caught. Years passed as pour Fallow was used as a slave for very little food. She regrets all that he has made her do, although it isn’t her fault at all. Fallow has runaway several times hoping to tell the police, but every time she has been tracked down by vicious dogs of his. Her parents still search desperately for her, although she doesn’t know it, or them…
Crush: None
Personality: Shy, lonely, depressed, yet is friendly.
Picture or Description:
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After she gets experimented on her hair turns white, and her eyes turn into soft brown deer eyes like the one below.
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others: Fallow doesn’t talk. She can, she just in a state of depression, and choices not to. Partly because she feels guilty for doing all the things she made to do. Also she would NEVER hurt anyone.
(I forget to say that she would never hurt anyone so I added that.)
 
(I forget to say that she would never hurt anyone so I added that.)
(OH, I love this. still accepted)


(I posted this four pages ago. Please respond...)
The wolf looked up at Amy. "His name's Hero." Amy announced as she gave the wolf something to eat. She leaned close to the wolf and whispered something to him softly. Then she laid her head down on his thin body.
(Sorry, I missed that. And I love how you started)

Three men in black suits make her in the ally way "Miss, may we ask you something" as one of the three came towards her.
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Ben came back and looked at the wolf and smiled

even though it was a true story Ben's tone made Addy think that it was just a dream "it might have just been a dream..."

Ben chuckled "Must have been" he said "Because here, you're just like any other teenage criminal" he said

Joshua looked at Ben with a scowl.


Mark looked to Sara then stopped and leaned against a tree "I will be. Just too much blood loss"

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Pat looked down at her hands. She had helped Mark to hide often, though she hadn't known cops were after him, just his father.

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Chilali smiled and kissed his cheek also

Sara looked at him "I hope so" she said then looked around in case there might be someone watching.
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The chief looked at files they had of both Sara and Mark. He first took a look at Mark's and sighed then wrote something in it and put it away, then looked into Sara's but then a bunch of papers fell out of it.
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Jason looked at her lovingly.

RADICAAAAAAAAL. Seriously. I say radical instead of "cool" and "awesome")

Viveka heard them comming and stood up to meET the guards at the door.

(Thanks, this thing (I hope) will look great!!)

The guards then motioned for Viveka to follow them.
 
(OH, I love this. still accepted)


(Sorry, I missed that. And I love how you started)

Three men in black suits make her in the ally way "Miss, may we ask you something" as one of the three came towards her.
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Ben came back and looked at the wolf and smiled


Ben chuckled "Must have been" he said "Because here, you're just like any other teenage criminal" he said

Joshua looked at Ben with a scowl.



Sara looked at him "I hope so" she said then looked around in case there might be someone watching.
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The chief looked at files they had of both Sara and Mark. He first took a look at Mark's and sighed then wrote something in it and put it away, then looked into Sara's but then a bunch of papers fell out of it.
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Jason looked at her lovingly.


(Thanks, this thing (I hope) will look great!!)

The guards then motioned for Viveka to follow them.
"but still i wouldn't have steeled from anyone or hurt anyone plus the type of white cane i have is really hard to hurt someone with because of it's for storage or trips" Addy said as she started dissembling it "it's not worth it to make it fall apart"
 
"but still i wouldn't have steeled from anyone or hurt anyone plus the type of white cane i have is really hard to hurt someone with because of it's for storage or trips" Addy said as she started dissembling it "it's not worth it to make it fall apart"

Ben looked and sighed "I don't believe you" he said then went back into his office and shut the door.
 

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