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[ChicknsRock]

Trying to..... phone nots letting me copy....

Okay, nice story but is have a very basic plot, where the antagonist? Is it survival or a rival herd? The rules are great.... but the color choices hurt my eyes.... like the basic picture for each herd land but pitty no map to explain the bounders, the form is good for this type of RP.

https://www.backyardchickens.com/a/wild-horse-rp-pm-to-join-character-page i did some changes, but i like the colors.

 

[ilovemysilkie]

Can i be a critic?

x2

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Quote: I'm currently not accepting anymore critics. I'm sorry. u v u

 

[OwlLover]

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My goodness Chickenfan, I'm sorry you've been waiting on this for so long!

 

[ilovemysilkie]

Oh, Okay.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Oh, Okay.

Please, no guilting.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

I'm sorry I haven't been on here lately, though. Please let me know if you need anything else.

 

[ilovemysilkie]

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I'm not.

 

[Chickenfan4life]

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My goodness Chickenfan, I'm sorry you've been waiting on this for so long!

Thanks. And, yeah, you're right about the male dominance rule, since Chroma Pack is also led by a female. And as for Thrush Pack, Yeah, the Alpha Female is more dominant, I think. Thanks. And, it was worth waiting on.

 

[ChicknsRock]

I have a new rp please look at it: https://www.backyardchickens.com/t/843353/wolves-a-wolf-rp