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[miss heny]

i know right? and i think he hi-jacked the thread LOL

 

[SuperChickenDude327]

*Rolls eyes.*

 

[miss heny]

vhat? XD

 

[SuperChickenDude327]

I dunno! XD!

 

[miss heny]

diva,ducky, you two are lurking.....

 

[Broken]

Until you said my name I wasn't ...

 

[miss heny]

i saw your name on the list before i posted

 

[Broken]

I wasn't on.

Anyways, I think you should put like websites that help people with grammar and such up.

 

[miss heny]

me?! 0-0

 

[Yoki]

Nix says thanks to Diva! And she is glad you spotted those errors. She had no idea about the stop time bit, but it makes sense.
(the FP won't be edited for a while, but it will be ASAP)