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[Mother_Hen2011]

Thank you hun !!! If you dont mind Id like to use those.. And tense i dont even know what that means to be honest rofl ... my word pad doesnt have spell check or anything..

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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I meant Microsoft word, I don't know whether you have it or not. Also, some browsers have spell check already, or you can set them to. Tense as in past tense, present tense, future tense.

Like - He seen her eyes flutter open and than closed again.

That should be - He saw her eyes flutter open, then closed again.

You are also having a lot of run-on sentences. Just trying to help.

(All this stuff is fresh in my mind as i'm in my second year of middle school)

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

Thanks hun I know your trying to help and I apreciate it... I think I need to get a program that will help me with tense and stuff rofl.. I havent been in school since I was 17 and Im 23 today so lol

6 years..... ergh i need to go back to school roflmao

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

I do have microsoft word 2007 lol just wasnt using it lol

 

[horsecrazychicklovingkid]

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[WooingWyandotte]

Where'd the story go?

 

[Mother_Hen2011]

I havent been working on the story but my hen gave me this

Porscha my hen was attacked by my dog the other day and while she was in the recovery coop she laid this beautiful pastel green egg!!!

My first egg to

Im soo proud of her!!!

This is the proud momma

She is an EEger hehe shes sooo awesome I love her!!
Cant wait to see what other beautiful eggs she has in store for me along with her 2 sisters