Warrior Cats CHAT THREAD!*For newbies and lovers only*

[HeavensHens88]

MY PROLOGUE STARTS WITH THE MURDER OF A MATE, HER KITS, AND UTTER BETRAYAL!!!!!

Mmmm yes sounds lovely

can I get a glass of milk with all that goodness XD

Foxheart pulled away from Nightshade's corpse, her bloodied fangs glowing red like embers beneath the cold, uncaring light of the moon. She kicked the undistinguishable scraps of fur that once were Scorchstar's brand-new kits aside as though they were nettling piles of moss. Her fleet of warriors from FogClan looked on indifferently, completely emotionless.
Scorchstar let out a screech and flung himself at Foxheart. His claws flailed wildly as he was shoved into the dirt, his breath ragged and uneven from enraged grief. He went limp under the weight of one of the FogClan warriors.
One of the warriors that he had once reigned over as FogClan's leader.
"Finish me, Foxheart," Scorchstar spat into the dirt, his entire world throbbing with a hurricane of red grief. "Have one of my warriors hold me still so you can end it all."
Scorchstar, the cat who had murdered innumerable dozens, was pleading for a mercy killing.
Foxheart strolled over to the pinned Scorchstar, her plumed tail bobbing up and waving in complete domineering cruelty. "No, Scorchstar," she purred, her voice dripping like poisoned honey. She leaned down into his face and let out a long breath laden with the spilt blood of his mate, knowing perfectly well that he couldn't move with Snakefang atop of him. "I was your mate for too long not to understand you." Her dark eyes swirled with satisfied vengeance, devoid of the moon's light. "And I know that living after this will prove to be the ultimate everlasting turmoil for you."
(Only maybe an eighth of the entire prologue, but I had to give you guys a taste! )

 

[HeavensHens88]

UH STARCLAN YES!!!!
You and Frost are THE BEST drawer's I've met.
So I've figured my cover out.
I hope it's not to detailed and you can kinda picture it.
So for the cat in the little cropped photo, ya know, that tiny little thing with the photo of your main character?Or one of them?
Well, if you can do it, I want to have a pitch black Tom with electric blue eyes in there(Hint hint)
And for the rest I want a forest, with five cats, Two black cats, a tan and white cat, a calico cat and a gray cat.
Can you do that?

Omg that's so sweet of you to say especially since I'm not to good at drawing cats, I'm much much better at drawing dragons...but anyway that cover sounds really really cool! Mine is going to be pretty hard to draw since I want a billion of important cats on it ;-;

Also I hope you noticed I haven't released the title of my story, I want it to be a surprise :3

Kyndra. That means so much!!!!
And, yes, Frost and I will do everything within our capacity to make your cover a reality!!!!!

 

[Cluckcluck1215]

Foxheart pulled away from Nightshade's corpse, her bloodied fangs glowing red like embers beneath the cold, uncaring light of the moon. She kicked the undistinguishable scraps of fur that once were Scorchstar's brand-new kits aside as though they were nettling piles of moss. Her fleet of warriors from FogClan looked on indifferently, completely emotionless.
Scorchstar let out a screech and flung himself at Foxheart. His claws flailed wildly as he was shoved into the dirt, his breath ragged and uneven from enraged grief. He went limp under the weight of one of the FogClan warriors.
One of the warriors that he had once reigned over as FogClan's leader.
"Finish me, Foxheart," Scorchstar spat into the dirt, his entire world throbbing with a hurricane of red grief. "Have one of my warriors hold me still so you can end it all."
Scorchstar, the cat who had murdered innumerable dozens, was pleading for a mercy killing.
Foxheart strolled over to the pinned Scorchstar, her plumed tail bobbing up and waving in complete domineering cruelty. "No, Scorchstar," she purred, her voice dripping like poisoned honey. She leaned down into his face and let out a long breath laden with the spilt blood of his mate, knowing perfectly well that he couldn't move with Snakefang atop of him. "I was your mate for too long not to understand you." Her dark eyes swirled with satisfied vengeance, devoid of the moon's light. "And I know that living after this will prove to be the ultimate everlasting turmoil for you."
(Only maybe an eighth of the entire prologue, but I had to give you guys a taste! )

*dies*
Great minds think alike
Chapter one is so boring.I MEAN COME ON!CROWPAW IS IN IT!!!!!!

 

[HeavensHens88]

Foxheart pulled away from Nightshade's corpse, her bloodied fangs glowing red like embers beneath the cold, uncaring light of the moon. She kicked the undistinguishable scraps of fur that once were Scorchstar's brand-new kits aside as though they were nettling piles of moss. Her fleet of warriors from FogClan looked on indifferently, completely emotionless.
Scorchstar let out a screech and flung himself at Foxheart. His claws flailed wildly as he was shoved into the dirt, his breath ragged and uneven from enraged grief. He went limp under the weight of one of the FogClan warriors.
One of the warriors that he had once reigned over as FogClan's leader.
"Finish me, Foxheart," Scorchstar spat into the dirt, his entire world throbbing with a hurricane of red grief. "Have one of my warriors hold me still so you can end it all."
Scorchstar, the cat who had murdered innumerable dozens, was pleading for a mercy killing.
Foxheart strolled over to the pinned Scorchstar, her plumed tail bobbing up and waving in complete domineering cruelty. "No, Scorchstar," she purred, her voice dripping like poisoned honey. She leaned down into his face and let out a long breath laden with the spilt blood of his mate, knowing perfectly well that he couldn't move with Snakefang atop of him. "I was your mate for too long not to understand you." Her dark eyes swirled with satisfied vengeance, devoid of the moon's light. "And I know that living after this will prove to be the ultimate everlasting turmoil for you."
(Only maybe an eighth of the entire prologue, but I had to give you guys a taste! )

*dies*
Great minds think alike
Chapter one is so boring.I MEAN COME ON!CROWPAW IS IN IT!!!!!!

Wait, I'm confused. Did I accidentally put Crowpaw into my prologue somewhere?

 

[Frost bite88]

Foxheart pulled away from Nightshade's corpse, her bloodied fangs glowing red like embers beneath the cold, uncaring light of the moon. She kicked the undistinguishable scraps of fur that once were Scorchstar's brand-new kits aside as though they were nettling piles of moss. Her fleet of warriors from FogClan looked on indifferently, completely emotionless.
Scorchstar let out a screech and flung himself at Foxheart. His claws flailed wildly as he was shoved into the dirt, his breath ragged and uneven from enraged grief. He went limp under the weight of one of the FogClan warriors.
One of the warriors that he had once reigned over as FogClan's leader.
"Finish me, Foxheart," Scorchstar spat into the dirt, his entire world throbbing with a hurricane of red grief. "Have one of my warriors hold me still so you can end it all."
Scorchstar, the cat who had murdered innumerable dozens, was pleading for a mercy killing.
Foxheart strolled over to the pinned Scorchstar, her plumed tail bobbing up and waving in complete domineering cruelty. "No, Scorchstar," she purred, her voice dripping like poisoned honey. She leaned down into his face and let out a long breath laden with the spilt blood of his mate, knowing perfectly well that he couldn't move with Snakefang atop of him. "I was your mate for too long not to understand you." Her dark eyes swirled with satisfied vengeance, devoid of the moon's light. "And I know that living after this will prove to be the ultimate everlasting turmoil for you."
(Only maybe an eighth of the entire prologue, but I had to give you guys a taste! )

Now that's also a good prologue, I'm feeling imitated right now ;-;

 

[Cluckcluck1215]

Wait, I'm confused. Did I accidentally put Crowpaw into my prologue somewhere?

NOOOO
I'm saying because both of our Prouloges have murders by evil cats in them.
I'm talking about Crowpaw in MY book, Chapter one.This is how far I'm into Chapter one:

Chapter 1

Playful mrrows of laughter yelped in front of him.A sleek black Tom lay in the clearing of camp, his head low.Crowpaw lay his head on his front paw's, unsure of what to do.His tail lashed slightly as he tried to stop tears from seeping out of his eyes.It had been two moons since her father was murdered, but he couldn't get over the fact that he would never see Ferrowpelt again.Ferrowpelt raised Crowpaw since he was 3 moons old, when his mother, Silverclaw was murdered.Crowpaw snapped his head up as a kit bumbed into him,"Watch it!"He hissed, leaping up.He realized it was Nettlekit,"Oh, sorry Nettlekit,"He murmured."I didn't realize it was you,"He meowed.Nettlekit gave a tiny squeak,"It's ok, Crowpaw!Its really my falt, Lilypaw, Rabbitkit and I were playing and I tumbled over and hit you,"She squeaked.Crowpaw chuckled,"It's alright,"He meowed.He followed Nettlekit back to where they were playing.He purred and nuzzled Lilypaw.

My Prouloge came SO easy!Why isn't this?!

 

[HeavensHens88]

Foxheart pulled away from Nightshade's corpse, her bloodied fangs glowing red like embers beneath the cold, uncaring light of the moon. She kicked the undistinguishable scraps of fur that once were Scorchstar's brand-new kits aside as though they were nettling piles of moss. Her fleet of warriors from FogClan looked on indifferently, completely emotionless.
Scorchstar let out a screech and flung himself at Foxheart. His claws flailed wildly as he was shoved into the dirt, his breath ragged and uneven from enraged grief. He went limp under the weight of one of the FogClan warriors.
One of the warriors that he had once reigned over as FogClan's leader.
"Finish me, Foxheart," Scorchstar spat into the dirt, his entire world throbbing with a hurricane of red grief. "Have one of my warriors hold me still so you can end it all."
Scorchstar, the cat who had murdered innumerable dozens, was pleading for a mercy killing.
Foxheart strolled over to the pinned Scorchstar, her plumed tail bobbing up and waving in complete domineering cruelty. "No, Scorchstar," she purred, her voice dripping like poisoned honey. She leaned down into his face and let out a long breath laden with the spilt blood of his mate, knowing perfectly well that he couldn't move with Snakefang atop of him. "I was your mate for too long not to understand you." Her dark eyes swirled with satisfied vengeance, devoid of the moon's light. "And I know that living after this will prove to be the ultimate everlasting turmoil for you."
(Only maybe an eighth of the entire prologue, but I had to give you guys a taste! )

Now that's also a good prologue, I'm feeling imitated right now ;-;

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! How did I imitate you???????

 

[Frost bite88]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! How did I imitate you???????

Ohhh no it's fine, I'm just a bit in shock at how good everyone's writing is!!!

 

[HeavensHens88]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! How did I imitate you???????

Ohhh no it's fine, I'm just a bit in shock at how good everyone's writing is!!!

Thank you! Your writing's epic too, though!!
XD your autospell must have changed INTIMIDATE to IMITATE; I thought I had somehow copied you!

 

[Frost bite88]

Thank you! Your writing's epic too, though!!
XD your autospell must have changed INTIMIDATE to IMITATE; I thought I had somehow copied you!

XD Ohhh no it was just me auto correct sorry!!!