Chapter 1
Playful mrrows of laughter yelped in front of him.A sleek black Tom lay in the clearing of camp, his head low.Crowpaw lay his head on his front paw's, unsure of what to do.His tail lashed slightly as he tried to stop tears from seeping out of his eyes.It had been two moons since her father was murdered, but he couldn't get over the fact that he would never see Ferrowpelt again.Ferrowpelt raised Crowpaw since he was 3 moons old, when his mother, Silverclaw was murdered.Crowpaw snapped his head up as a kit bumbed into him,"Watch it!"He hissed, leaping up.He realized it was Nettlekit,"Oh, sorry Nettlekit,"He murmured."I didn't realize it was you,"He meowed.Nettlekit gave a tiny squeak,"It's ok, Crowpaw!Its really my falt, Lilypaw, Rabbitkit and I were playing and I tumbled over and hit you,"She squeaked.Crowpaw chuckled,"It's alright,"He meowed.He followed Nettlekit back to where they were playing.He purred and nuzzled Lilypaw.
Crowpaw sighed as he trotted along the woods.Hawkclaw was leading a patrol and Crowpaw padded next to him.The black Tom looked out across the trees.He shook his head and tensed.He dropped on all fours, and creeped forward.He saw a mouse scuffling along the ground, darting here and there, looking for seeds.Crowpaw crouched and crawled slowly, He pin-pointed the mouse's position, crouched and lept.He gave the mouse a swift bite to the neck and it barley had time to squeak.Crowpaw buried it, and padded up to Pinepaw,"Nice catch, Crowpaw!"The red SheCat mrrowed."Thanks,"Crowpaw muttered."Come on Crowpaw lightin' up already!"she hissed and stalked away to Sorrelpaw,"Toms!"She hissed.Blackpaw pricked his ears,"HELLO!Im right here and so is Crowpaw!"He growled.
*sigh*
I want to finish it, because I need to do chapter Canopypaw!
Hawkclaw was leading a patrol. Definitely sounds like Hawkclaw!

Ashstripe's famous.
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GUY FIERI IS GOING TO VOICE LONGTAIL?!?!?! 

PLEASE do not post like crazy!
