Website help

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by gaited horse, Aug 15, 2011.

  1. gaited horse

    gaited horse Merry Christmas!

    Aug 14, 2008
    Fernley, NV
    Last edited: Aug 15, 2011
  2. Alexis

    Alexis Chillin' With My Peeps

    Jan 28, 2008
    Philomath, Oregon
    I have designed several sites, and I think yours looks nice. It's clean, streamlined and not so busy that you can't find what you're looking for. On the flip side. It's kinda boring [​IMG] (You did say not to sugar-coat, right? [​IMG] ) If I were you, I'd add a photo to the main page, and do some work on a header. Instead of just using text, use a graphic with the name of your bunny business in it.

    On your For Sale page - it would clear things up a bit if you could put a mention somewhere that prices are listed elsewhere.

    Otherwise, nice work! [​IMG]
  3. froggie71

    froggie71 Chillin' With My Peeps

    Apr 18, 2009
    Shamong, NJ
    I think it's a good start, but like Alexis said, kind of boring.

    Also to make it look more professional, make sure spelling, grammar and punctuation are correct. Right off I saw: We are now accpeting Names on our waiting list for both breeds. Accepting is spelled incorrect and Names probably should not be capitalized.
    We are pleased to welcome outr new herd buck Double B Bunnies Trent

    With this line: Please note that on stock marked watching they will not be for sale until after I pick which one I keep which is between age three months and six months
    I think it should be reworded. " Please note that stock marked watching will not be available until 3 - 6 months of age.
    Just sounds less professional when you say "until I pick which one I keep".

    Having a little trouble with my internet right now, so I didn't finish looking at your site. I do think it is off to a good start though. [​IMG]
    Last edited: Aug 15, 2011
  4. ChickLover98

    ChickLover98 The Chicken Princess

    Apr 24, 2010
  5. gaited horse

    gaited horse Merry Christmas!

    Aug 14, 2008
    Fernley, NV
    Thank you for the help.

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