WEEKLY POEM FROM THE UNOFFICIAL POET OF BYC!!

Discussion in 'Random Ramblings' started by gmendoza, May 21, 2012.

  1. gmendoza

    gmendoza Songster

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    TB

    by Gabriel Mendoza

    A new friend blew in one morning
    her name was TB
    as I breathed her in with a gasp
    I knew one day she would scar me

    I inhaled her treacherous smoke
    as she asked to be my friend
    but I actually went to ask her
    to contaminate me with her image

    From day to day it went on
    like a lingering sickness does
    I welcomed her stench
    the rotting air that made me
    foul of breath
    She penetrated my inner fortress
    my sanctum seclorum
    every lung inhale,every moment
    seemed to be the last
    a relief, a release

    Then one day out of the blue,she left
    finally my body felt fresher
    fresh air,fresh breath
    and the scars that lined my lungs from TB
    and the heart that skips a beat from TB
    and the mind that wont forget TB
     
  2. redhen

    redhen Kiss My Grits...

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    Very good! :clap
     
  3. b.hromada

    b.hromada Flock Mistress

    Nice job!!! [​IMG]
     
  4. gmendoza

    gmendoza Songster

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    tank you tank you!!

    for my encore I'll attempt to gargle peanut butter!!!

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