WRITERS WANTED!

[Bush Chickens]

Le poke?!

 

[Chickenfan4life]

Le poke?!

You know, a joke. Poking the thread like you'd poke a dead animal to see if it's alive? LOL!

 

[Bush Chickens]

Lol,yeah, but "le" poke? did you read my really stupid story on here?

 

[Chickenfan4life]

Lol,yeah, but "le" poke?

did you read my really stupid story on here?

I dunno, I was just fooling around. XD And, yeah, I read your "stupid" story, and thought it was a HECK of a lot better than what I can do!

 

[Bush Chickens]

Meh.itz stoopid

 

[Chickenfan4life]

Meh.itz stoopid

No it isn't! You have a great talent!

 

[Bush Chickens]

I just tapped that down on a free notebook app I just got,wasn't really meaning to write anything. I don't see how it could really be a book if there's no plot to follow...

 

[Jeanna Marie]

Punctuation.... very important. Also be careful of using double adjectives and too much conjecture. But, over all, very good writing. All good authors have a copy editor...lol.... good luck with your writing!

 

[Fluffballs]

Peacock, your writing was amazing! At the very start, I was a little worried because of all the long words (don't get me wrong, I love big words, I was just afraid I'd be reading a boring essay or something), but then the story sucked me in! Write more, please! Bush Chickens, your story was great too! Don't beat up on yourself! I think you could have taken more time, and have written more before moving on to the next scene. Describe, show the reader, transport them into your world! That's what I'm struggling with in my writing. You know, not being afraid to set the stage before beginning an act or fulfilling the first act before showing the next. But it was really interesting, and I want to know more! Okay, hoped that was sense....

 

[Bush Chickens]

sorry,i didnt actually mean to end up writing something, i will go back over it though. Which part did i cut too fast?