I ended up reading this again and realized how little editing I did. There's a lot of repetitiveness, and the part where he crashes into the fire escape is really glitchy... The first couple paragraphs that I wrote when I wasn't so stressed are good, though.
So on a scale of choked on your jello cube to -you took new pj's to the shower, not realizing you had already put clean pj's on and therefore didn't need them-
how sh00kened are u?
Thank you for understanding, I appreciate your cooperation. :hugs
First you need to think up a story, and then create a thread on the "fun and games" forum. Write your story idea on there, along with pasting BYC rules in the post. The BYC rules are posted as a thread, also.
I apologize, child, but... Have you actually role played before? This isn't like the fun-fun role plays. Its more serious and writerly. We make paragraphs and spend hours writing and plotting. You spent maybe five minutes tops on that character.