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i can write good though. i got an a on my english paper yesterday.
Bill's my brother. it took awhile to make him honestly.
Honey, you obviously put no effort into your charrie.
If you got an A on your English paper, you would know to capitalize I, English, A, since you're talking about a grade and capitalize the beginning of sentences.
From your physical description, your charrie is a floating shirt and pants.
You didn't give him any personality whatsoever, and you made him have no drawbacks because of his skills. Which in turn will make him a Mary Sue. You cannot have a character without flaws or your character will not be interesting for anyone and for yourself.
Sorry sweetie maybe another time.
 
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How do i do that?
Thank you for understanding, I appreciate your cooperation. :hugs

First you need to think up a story, and then create a thread on the "fun and games" forum. Write your story idea on there, along with pasting BYC rules in the post. The BYC rules are posted as a thread, also.
 

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