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[44Wolves]

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(That's more like Turtle. Subvissive, Kind and Polite. Not a Stealer. As I said before, please READ the Personalities. *Winks* But Turtle can continue.)

[[You might want to add more info on them, for instance how many cubs stolen each or how/who they are guarded by so as not to escape so its more clear. There is only once sentence on Turtle in the setup- oh and nightnegale doesn't have a writeup yet. I know exactly who I'm playing but I would not have known what you want those characters to be...YOu might want to put longer write-ups of each wolf, both PC and NPC on your "BYC page" and then you can tell people to look at it. I might should do that for FireTiger too- interesting things like 'is never heard moving' or 'talks too much' and 'the scar on the left side closest to his shoulder causes limping in weather changes']]

PC and NPC? What are those?)
(I don't think Nighingale is safe, Gobb needs to PM me her info.)
Beaver continued calling for Rabbit, Turtle and the daughter, Hare.

 

[FireTigeris]

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[[You might want to add more info on them, for instance how many cubs stolen each or how/who they are guarded by so as not to escape so its more clear. There is only once sentence on Turtle in the setup- oh and nightingale doesn't have a writeup yet. I know exactly who I'm playing but I would not have known what you want those characters to be...YOu might want to put longer write-ups of each wolf, both PC and NPC on your "BYC page" and then you can tell people to look at it. I might should do that for FireTiger too- interesting things like 'is never heard moving' or 'talks too much' and 'the scar on the left side closest to his shoulder causes limping in weather changes']]

PC and NPC? What are those?)
(I don't think Nightingale is safe, Gobb needs to PM me her info.)
Beaver continued calling for Rabbit, Turtle and the daughter, Hare.

PC= Player Character, like Tiger and Beaver
NPC = Non Player character, anyone can 'drive' these characters as long as it makes sense. (but usually the storyteller/dungeon master/ game master -whatever controls them and the players cannot).

**Hears Beaver, looks back at his escort**

Now what?

 

[Gerbil]

Hawk looked at Tiger then towards Beaver's voice, "That is the question of the day"

 

[44Wolves]

Beaver finished is Nightly calling for Rabbit, and he grabbed a Moose Leg from the Food Pit. He brought it into a lonely corner and a few tears soaked the remaining Moose Fur. He stared blankly ahead. ( You can also make more PSO, just Put that the wolf is in PSO in the Other. You can also edit a character, but not the personality or apperance, but maybe more details. Just copy the original and edit it, then PM me.)

 

[Gerbil]

She padded back towards camp, mumbling about the pso and Nightingale, "we need to get help or something, two against an army is looking to promising"

 

[FireTigeris]

*enters camp*

(to Hawk) I am injured and old, that took almost I am. It is strange that they did not all attack me or attack me at once...

I have not eaten, I must eat.

*waits*

Swan released the young female, I do not know if they made it back yet.

 

[Gerbil]

"Go rest old man, go eat. The pso is strange in it's ways, not always logical in it's movements, I will go see who I can get to help"

 

[BirdNut]

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Not sure I understand. So, you're saying to not write the description anywhere else but the 2nd party?

 

[44Wolves]

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Not sure I understand. So, you're saying to not write the description anywhere else but the 2nd party?

Ya, it's easier and in the right style so I don't have to change the whole thing, like Do it like "A LArge Black She-wolf with streaming White stripes" not "Hoot is a Small white He-wolf with sloppy Black Stripes" and MOST DEFINATELY NOT "I am a Slender white she-wolf and I have 2 Pups. I am a sleek, elegant Hunter and my Eyes sparkle"

)

 

[FireTigeris]

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**eats and then goes pack to his prison**

Alpha-Swan bullied the wolf-who-carried-away. The other wolf ran away with Swan towards camp, she said she knew the hunters were returning.

**lays in whatever sun comes into prison, if there is no sun there he calls his guard to watch him and goes into some sunny patch**