~A Wisp of Sand~ a a desert cat tribe rp

[Amer]

"when I was three moons old, my mother had left some time before that from this tribe, to find a mate, she joined one, and became my father`s mate. Cobra came later and killed them. me and my brothers fled, we knew about the tribe our mother had come from, and our great uncles and grandparents. So we joined this tribe, since then Thunder and Flame have taken care of us." River said. She felt like her heart was being pierced talking about her parents.
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Claw followed her laughing as they jumped from

"Wow," replied Nile. "My parents were never like that, and were never rooted to this Tribe or anything like that." She looked at her paws. She had nearly told River who her parents were! Like that! She had just opened herself to a cat for a second, and this is what happened. "Must have been hard," Lion mused. He wondered if it was harder than his past.
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Thorn had the fast breathing heart beating feeling of adrenaline. She hopped over farther gaps.

 

[Amer]

"when I was three moons old, my mother had left some time before that from this tribe, to find a mate, she joined one, and became my father`s mate. Cobra came later and killed them. me and my brothers fled, we knew about the tribe our mother had come from, and our great uncles and grandparents. So we joined this tribe, since then Thunder and Flame have taken care of us." River said. She felt like her heart was being pierced talking about her parents.
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Claw followed her laughing as they jumped from

(Do you mean mother's because that doesn't make sense.)

 

[RiverStorm]

(Do you mean mother's because that doesn't make sense.)

(Edited. Would you re-read to cause the first time i chopped that up XD)

 

[Amer]

(Makes sense now.)

 

[RoostersAreAwesome]

"I just.... I just don't want to abandon my tribe. I want to be with Pebble...." Chipmunk mewed quietly.

Dart blinked, uncertainty ruffling his pelt. How can a cat choose one part of his family over another? He thought, feeling a stab of pity for the conflicted Tom.

Chipmunk looked at Dart, his newfound friend. He thought of his old tribe. He thought of his selfish parents who loathed him and thought him weak. Pebble is right. No one will care if I go. He realized. His eyes suddenly became clear and he looked at Dart. "I think... I won't go back. Not even to say goodbye." he said, knowing that he would probably never see his old tribe again. But it didn't matter, Thunderer Tribe would be his new family now.

 

[RiverStorm]

"Wow," replied Nile. "My parents were never like that, and were never rooted to this Tribe or anything like that." She looked at her paws. She had nearly told River who her parents were! Like that! She had just opened herself to a cat for a second, and this is what happened. "Must have been hard," Lion mused. He wondered if it was harder than his past.
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Thorn had the fast breathing heart beating feeling of adrenaline. She hopped over farther gaps.

River smiled at them and replied to Lion "Yes, it was."
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Suddenly Claw took a great leap and sailed over her head when he landed in-front of her he smiled smugly at her

 

[LittlePip21]

~Character Form~
Name: Cobra
Age: 5 years
Species:Jungle Cat
Gender: Male
Physical Attributes(how it looks): black pelt, with a brown hue. markings on shoulders similar to a cobra. eyes are a deep golden color.
Personality: Cunning and manipulative, with a ambition for collecting and surrounding himself with powerful cats, and making the weak and elderly worship him (In a our great ruler! kind of way.)
History: born into the snapping river tribe, he grew up among his tribe mates, including his friend Mongoose. during this time he falls in love with a cat named Oleander. but, he found his drive for power leading him beyond his tribe, and when his loyalties are questioned by Mongoose one fateful night, a fight ensues, resulting in Cobra leaving the clan, and Mongoose remaining with torn and bleeding ears. he soon climbs his way to the top of a group of rouges, putting their blood thirsty talents under his iron grip. he returned with his army to conquer his birth tribe. claiming Oleander for himself and setting himself and his rouges up to rule over the frightened tribe. his kits born to him were kept from knowing there fathers identity. Nile and lion soon fled after Cobra's reign of terror grew darker and darker. now he tightens his grip on the Snapping river tribe, taking the lives of any who dare oppose him. Mongoose, disgusted with her traitorous friend stands up to him in attempt to dethrone him, along with her two allies (rivers parents.) this plan fails, resulting in the execution of the upstarts, excepting Mongoose who escaped, and River and her brothers, who ran during the confusion.
Family:

Spoiler

Mongoose, his sister.

Mate/crush: Oleander
Kits: Lion and Nile
Other:
Username: @LittlePip21

 

[RiverStorm]

(Makes sense now.)

 

[Amer]

River smiled at them and replied to Lion "Yes, it was."
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Suddenly Claw took a great leap and sailed over her head when he landed in-front of her he smiled smugly at her

Lion contemplated.
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Thorn rolled on her back and purred, breathing heavily.

 

[LittlePip21]

Chipmunk looked at Dart, his newfound friend. He thought of his old tribe. He thought of his selfish parents who loathed him and thought him weak. Pebble is right. No one will care if I go. He realized. His eyes suddenly became clear and he looked at Dart. "I think... I won't go back. Not even to say goodbye." he said, knowing that he would probably never see his old tribe again. But it didn't matter, Thunderer Tribe would be his new family now.

Dart jumped to his feet. "alright!" he meowed butting his friend's shoulder with his head. "come on! we've got to catch up to the others!" he said, rushing back out to where the desert began.