~A Wisp of Sand~ a a desert cat tribe rp

[LilJoe]

@RoostersAreAwesome

 

[Amer]

(Umm..not sure what to say..)
Willow nodded. She knew Pebble probably couldn't tell she was responding so she added an, "Mhm."
(REALLY short sorry)

Crimson looked at Pebble sideways, wondering if the blind cat realized he was doing it. "Stop eavesdropping on us. What must I do to make you leave us alone?" He asked.

 

[RoostersAreAwesome]

"Yes," replied the blue tabby tom

"Yes," said Night. "He has killed my Tribe before my eyes."
"My brother too," Nile chimed in. "My best friend also. My father is lost already. He cannot redeem himself. He isn't my father anymore! I don't even know my mother as much as I wish, she never saw me grow up. All I have left.... is Lion, he is the one cat I trust."
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Crimson replied "If I had kits, I would make them feel worthy, like my mother did," unlike my father. This cat knew hate, but so did he.

River turned to him. "That monster killed our parents! Your daughter! Don`t you care about that?"

River glanced at Nile and Night. "It`s time we end his reign of terror!"

Night didn't know how to make an equally reveling speech. So he said "Yup."
Nile said "Yes!" Cause I am not feeling the creative. (Someone needs to take Lion from me, because I am not doing him justice)
Oleander, however, was on Flame's side, though she disguised her words in a way that made her seem doubtful of their abilities, not of killing him. "You more than anyone know how dangerous he is. What makes you think you won't die? You'll get killed! And do you (she puts Lion on the spot) want to commit patricide?" He begins to feel uncomfortable.

Flame's head drooped at the mention of Snow. "Of course I do, River," he rasped, "But to kill a cat in revenge... it does something to you. Makes you a different cat." He looked around at Nile, River, Night, and Lion. "If there is a solution that doesn't involve killing, you must always take it."

Willow understood why the two cats, Crimson and Pebble, have felt unworthy and hated. Crimson, her mate, was hated, disregarded, and not trusted because he was accused of murdering his own mother, whom he loved. Willow had seen through that rumor and dismissed his bad attitude that, although seemed like the real him, was only shown because of all the hatred that was felt toward him. Pebble, on the other hand, Willow thought. Was unloved because of her handicap (correct?) .

Pebble nodded at Crimson. "Good," she mewed, sitting down to lick at her chest fur. She gave an indignant huff as she felt a coating of dust on her tongue.

@LilJoe @AMERAUCANAS4REAL @LittlePip21 @RoostersAreAwesome (Where'd you guys go??)

(I wasn't on byc for a while. )

( Okay lmao. What would you guys think if i kind of turned all of this into a book? i don't think i'd publish it and you'd all get creds too, but what would you think?)

(I think that would be awesome! If you need any help with editing (going through and correcting grammar, spelling, etc.) just let me know!)

(Umm..not sure what to say..)
Willow nodded. She knew Pebble probably couldn't tell she was responding so she added an, "Mhm."
(REALLY short sorry)

@RoostersAreAwesome

Crimson looked at Pebble sideways, wondering if the blind cat realized he was doing it. "Stop eavesdropping on us. What must I do to make you leave us alone?" He asked.

Pebble's ears flicked backwards and she got to her paws. "Don't get your fur in a mess, Mr. Sensitive." she growled, stalking off. Though Pebble didn't show it, she was surprised and disappointed at Crimson's sudden outburst. I suppose he's just like everyone else... not wanting me around. She thought bitterly, unsheathing her claws and swiping at the sandy ground in frustration.

 

[Amer]

Flame's head drooped at the mention of Snow. "Of course I do, River," he rasped, "But to kill a cat in revenge... it does something to you. Makes you a different cat." He looked around at Nile, River, Night, and Lion. "If there is a solution that doesn't involve killing, you must always take it."


Pebble nodded at Crimson. "Good," she mewed, sitting down to lick at her chest fur. She gave an indignant huff as she felt a coating of dust on her tongue.

(I wasn't on byc for a while. )

(I think that would be awesome! If you need any help with editing (going through and correcting grammar, spelling, etc.) just let me know!)





Pebble's ears flicked backwards and she got to her paws. "Don't get your fur in a mess, Mr. Sensitive." she growled, stalking off. Though Pebble didn't show it, she was surprised and disappointed at Crimson's sudden outburst. I suppose he's just like everyone else... not wanting me around. She thought bitterly, unsheathing her claws and swiping at the sandy ground in frustration.

Oleander nodded. But she was more worried about her beloved not dying. Lion saw this and realized that he still missed his father, leader of criminals or not. He had to watch out for his family. Oleander read this on his face and her eyes got big while her whiskers twitched. "I uh, gotta go!" She said hurriedly. She flushed, or at least it looked like it, but she was a cat, and she ran off. Lion watched as she dove behind a rock out of sight, but decided to stay with his mother.
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Crimson sighed and layed his face on his paws. Was being normal that hard to do? He could tell he had hurt the blind cat's feelings. Once again saying all the wrong things. All the things he should have said suddenly ran through his head. Now all he wanted to say was I'm sorry. I only thought it was appropriate for you to... keep out of our private business... no... not pop out of anymore bushes... I mean... I'm sorry for hurting your feelings. For as long as he thought that keeping a secret from all the cats was his own right, now he felt hurting the feelings of this blind cat was worse. But his words caught in his throat. Saying something could only make it worse.

 

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Pebble cocked her head and sniffed the air, trying to locate her brother. When she couldn't find him, she found a small patch of shade and lay down, putting her head on her paws.

 

[LittlePip21]

(Yo guys! I'm so sorry I haven't been on! I was away from Byc for a while! But I'll come and check in the evenings to rp!)

 

[Amer]

(Yo guys! I'm so sorry I haven't been on! I was away from Byc for a while! But I'll come and check in the evenings to rp!)

(Its fine.)

 

[Amer]

Dart and mongoose trailed along, watching as the cats gathered around Oleander

(Maybe they should meet Oleander, Dire, Flame, Lion, River, and Night.)


(@LilJoe maybe Ming Ming can pop out of the same bush rudely and come upon poor bush hating Crimson and confused Willow.)

(@Loveseed Farms what happened to ya?)

 

[Amer]

(@LoveseedFarms )

 

[LilJoe]

(Maybe they should meet Oleander, Dire, Flame, Lion, River, and Night.)


(@LilJoe maybe Ming Ming can pop out of the same bush rudely and come upon poor bush hating Crimson and confused Willow.)

(@Loveseed Farms what happened to ya?)

Willow watched poor pebble leave. She sighed.

Ming-Ming then suddenly jumped out of a bush. "HAI!" She said loudly