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Sparkle110 said:
No It's a WIP, @RiverStorm did say that He/she knew about that, I'm giving Him/her some different notes, it might come to scraping the peice and starting over, so I didn't want him/her to waste his/her work, so I asked him/her to stop
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River's a girl. Says so in her personal blip thing. Plus we RP'd together for a while. I was just asking, cuz I thought I might want to try...
 
Feather Hearts said:
Lol, I'm home schooled too. I'm to lazy to do work tho
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Lol XD

RiverStorm said:
Awesome!!! I love it! What are they saying?
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Blossom is saying 4 things
1. "why are you yelling at me?"

2. "I hope I din't set somthing on fire again....."

3." Did I miss a Class?"

4. "Did I forget to return a book?"

RiverStorm said:
@Sparkle110 Note that I just started
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OK great start, I'm going to give comment in the next update
RiverStorm said:
@Sparkle110 Still not done but better (I didn`t forget the wings just haven`t done them yet)
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OK not bad, A few things I'd like you to change to make your drawing look better/be more acurette

What program are you using?

1. (not so important) the body is too long, make it a bit shorter

2. (Important) make your lines thinner (I use a 7 pixel wide brush and a 5 pixel brush most commonly, but a tablet also thins it so I can use pressure for thick and thin lines so I'd use a 3 pixel and a 5 pixel intead of a 5 and 7 pixel brush)

3. (I'd do this improtant) her back is unnaturlally straight, I'd curve it a bit (Example below)

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BTW on the second one it's neck is too long, My bad!
becuse that's where a wolf's/dog's spine is, and that not really a line

4. (Not THAT important) her amulet is too think, it just a chain, I just draw a yellowy-orange line, no black lines requred!

5. (Not THAT important) her nose is too big (it should be about half that size)

6. (I'd fix this if I were you) the parts where the legs meet up with the body are not great (Example below)
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that back leg joint (the one between the paw and the rest of the leg) is too curvy
7. (Important) she looks a bit fat :barnie there go her days of running around and flying paying off (I'm not making fun of you)

I hope these were helpful! :D
 

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