Animator/Artist Chat Thread

[RiverStorm]

Yea I see what you mean, Can I give some pointers?

Sure

 

[Sparkle110]

Sure

OK so I won't go into great detail, but a few things show the red flag striaght away

1.

the back paw is longer than the front one, and thicker, wich compleaty undos what we are trying to put in, also, the bottom of the back paw is lower than the pront, and the paw it'self is larger

2.

that come up to fast and comes to be unnatural


3.

it looks like a bone is jutting out of her skin itsead of the leg being pulled back a bit before it come down to the ground, that's just poking out, think of how that back leg would be able to move, it can't!


4.

her nose is pointed like a fox, wolves and dohgs noses, are not that sharp and sicking out


Hope this helps!

 

[RiverStorm]

OK so I won't go into great detail, but a few things show the red flag striaght away

1.
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the back paw is longer than the front one, and thicker, wich compleaty undos what we are trying to put in, also, the bottom of the back paw is lower than the pront, and the paw it'self is larger

2.
View attachment 1155497

that come up to fast and comes to be unnatural


3.
View attachment 1155499

it looks like a bone is jutting out of her skin itsead of the leg being pulled back a bit before it come down to the ground, that's just poking out, think of how that back leg would be able to move, it can't!


4.
View attachment 1155502

her nose is pointed like a fox, wolves and dohgs noses, are not that sharp and sicking out


Hope this helps!

Thanks!

 

[RiverStorm]

@Sparkle110 Blossom

 

[Sparkle110]

@Sparkle110 Blossom
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hey It's better than the first one!

Also, what program do you use and do you have adrawing tablet (It's fine if you don't I just find they help, but they can be expensive!)

 

[RiverStorm]

hey It's better than the first one!

Also, what program do you use and do you have adrawing tablet (It's fine if you don't I just find they help, but they can be expensive!)

Thanks! just use photo shop CS5. yeah I do.

 

[EggyTheHen]

Great so I can exchage FireAlpaca files!

never heard of it, I'll look it up

Blender! Sweet!
I'm learing though a course on Lynda.com that's free through my library (won't say where for safety)
it's 7 hours! (yay......)


I'm making this outside the course right now!

I'm prepping the eyes right now so they look offf a bit, soory!

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Woah, that looks awesome so far.

 

[Sparkle110]

Thanks! just use photo shop CS5. yeah I do.

OK, mabey you could try FireAlpaca, it's free for all FYI

Woah, that looks awesome so far.[/QUOTE ]

Thanks!

 

[Sparkle110]

I just made this as 2 frames in a comic!

the OC's Name is Asterix (Not mine) and he is male

that first frame makes him look female though.....I need to fix that

@Peacechick713 Is going to put the next frames in, take it away Peacy!

 

[Peacechick713]

I just made this as 2 frames in a comic!

View attachment 1156883

the OC's Name is Asterix (Not mine) and he is male

that first frame makes him look female though.....I need to fix that

@Peacechick713 Is going to put the next frames in, take it away Peacy!

Got it! Also here's some work on a comic I did too! (@Sparkle110 is doing the last frame!)

This is for the prompt "On Guardian Isle Eclar was angry about a shadow creature consuming Aster's burning tail"

It came from my very high tech Idea maker! (Sarcasm)