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I am planning on making it more ACTTIONY
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Thank you. I have had numerous people say that and Think that I might just write A different story, due to many people saying that sort of thing. What kind of thing do you guys read? Because this is not the type of story I usually write.:0Clucky3255: Like Miss Heny, your story isn't really in a genre I fully appreciate. But I'd say it has potential.![]()
As far as constructive criticism goes, I think the story's punctuation and capitalization could use a little fixing up, but that's all easily fixed. Other than that: take time to develop the characters, use every storytelling trope you want in moderation, and have fun.
Fiction as in fanfiction, or fiction as in original fiction?Hello! I write mostly fiction stuff.![]()