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The black leaking into the white neck feathers, the very closely patterened black on the rest of the body. She looks pretty beefy too, but it is mainly the color that throws me. She should have a solid white head and neck, and her black barring should be very showy and have nice, equal distance between "bars" of color. If you look at some of the Silvers on Feathersite, they're quite ideal examples.
Really though - Her main problem is her neck coloration.
The black leaking into the white neck feathers, the very closely patterened black on the rest of the body. She looks pretty beefy too, but it is mainly the color that throws me. She should have a solid white head and neck, and her black barring should be very showy and have nice, equal distance between "bars" of color. If you look at some of the Silvers on Feathersite, they're quite ideal examples.

Really though - Her main problem is her neck coloration.