Can I get some feedback on this stuff?

[Fierlin1182]

I've been doing some blue and white paintings in art, after finishing my final "grand masterpiece" which I unfortunately do not have a pic of right now. THAT is something perhaps worth writing home about.
How do these look? I know they're pretty crappy, but I did them in ten minutes each

The lines are song lyrics, might I add.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Pretty. I like the second one.

 

[Fierlin1182]

That's the one I did first.

After that. things start getting slack... I think I'm going to resize them, those things are enormous.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

What's the last one supposed to be, though? I really like that one too I just can't tell what it is.

 

[Fierlin1182]

I haven't a clue. It started off as a building column, but I thought it looked nice with a reflection in the water so it morphed into a pond, with streams feeding it, and the columns became ice pillars.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

I see. It looks nice.

 

[Fierlin1182]

I love how the water looks so icy. It reminds me of something that I can't pin my mind on.

 

[Zinnia-Hen]

Yeah. :3

 

[luvinmychickens]

I really like the last one! It's so pretty!

 

[luvinmychickens]

Ooh the second one is nice too!