Can you critique my website and give me feedback?

[kuntrygirl]

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Good idea, good idea good idea. Making that change now.

 

[SarahFair]

I dont know if the website you use has designated fonts or not...
If not and you dont want such a straight lace as Times New try maybe:
Berylium
Century
Georgia
Plantagenet Cherokee

Occidental is a fun one

 

[kuntrygirl]

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I checked all the fonts and they only have Times New and Georgia, so I switched it to Georgia. Was the red color ok, or should I change that as well? I'm enjoying all of this feedback. Thank ya'll so much.

 

[kuntrygirl]

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Should I put this info on the first page or should I create another page for "For Sale" items?

 

[SarahFair]

Honestly I wasnt diggin the red

But I dont know much about colors

 

[WhiteMountainsRanch]

I like it. However I would make some changes, I have a modern taste, so everything I give you will be my opinion only, change or don't change.

And don't take anything the wrong way, lol sometimes I tend to come off as abrasive even if I don't intend to.

I would change the drawy animal background... reminds me of a nursery or preschool or something. Then use one color scheme and stick with it, example; earth-tones, primaries, etc...

I would change the first sentence to "Hi and welcome to Happy Acres Farm, we are a small farm located on the outskirts of Opelousas, Louisiana". Instead of saying the name twice- it's redundant.

Then the fourth sentence- We are a "certified" or "small" or "local" or "homegrown"- something other than Louisiana- again the redundancy thing.

Some of the fonts are different sizes? They should be consistent.

Love your gallery.

I would add a few more pages, maybe a page dedicated to each type of animal, ex one for chickens one for turkeys, and then talk about what you do with them and what's available, rather than lumping it all on the first page?


Hope this helps a little!

PS I use webs too, so let me know if you have any questions.

 

[debilorrah]

No links. Where you say you have stuff for sale, you should be able to click on it.

 

[onthespot]

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Should I put this info on the first page or should I create another page for "For Sale" items?

Most peoples' sites have a separate page just for For Sale stuff. Even if they are selling Dogs, Horses, Livestock, anything. The Sale page is usually the first link I click on when I go to a website.

 

[greathorse]

Pure snow is on it in terms of style. I would lose the elementary pre school look and go for more simple and straight forward. I think your audience is adults.

You sure have some thick skin, I would be defensive by now. Good for you.

 

[SarahFair]

Yes! That is what I was trying to think of..
It has a very... Young feel with the blue and red

I like the ideas of earth tones