Tim, your one pullet is very nice looking. Nice tight comb and wattles, deep red head and neck feathers and quite good pencilling. The cockerel is a nice body size, with good red colouring in his head, neck, back feathers. Unfortunately he should have black chest, belly, and leg feathers. It looks like he has some black colour there underneath, so you may still see those colours change. Is his comb smooth across it, or is it split? Difficult to see in the photo. If it's a smooth cushion, then it's not bad. And his wattles aren't that bad either. Remember, the Partridge combs and wattles are never as non-existent as the White's.