*-'~Chicken boy~`- * A story about a boy that learns chicken speech.

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I woke up a little while later, and stretched. I looked around, and saw the same eggs. Looking down, I saw that Shelly was out of her egg. “Shell?”
I called.
“Over here.”
I glanced behind me, and saw two strange creatures. They both had a hard beak, but where yellow. One had black on it, and the other had black, white, and red on top of it’s yellow. “Hey, Ryo! How are you?”
It began to move towards me with odd poles. “What are those?”
I asked, looking at them. The creature stopped, and looked down at them. Then he laughed. “They’re called legs, Ryo!”
It sounded like Rod, but didn’t look like him. I stood up on my ‘legs’, and walked across eggs towards him. The other creature – Shelly, probably – followed behind Rod, and I stopped. I had noticed on both of their legs was a red or pink band. Rod’s had markings that looked like COCKERAL. Shelly’s looked like PULLET. I had no idea what either of those meant, so I asked Rod. “Oh, so you haven’t gotten it yet? There’s this big-”
Suddenly, the entire gray sky lifted up, and a massive thing reached down and grabbed me with five thick poles. “HELP!”
I yelled, and began to kick at the poles. They didn’t have the fluff that I had, but boy, were they tough! I beat at them some more with my legs and long poles. I decided to call those ‘toes’. I beat at the huge poles with my toes, and even pecked them. After I gave up, I heard, “#W%F*L !&*GH F&R # ~H$~K. ^&* )*@! B% # ~&~K%R#L.”
I had no idea what that meant, but a big red band was put onto my leg, and I was placed inside a box. I looked up, and tried to jump, but it didn’t work. Surprisingly , Shelly and Rod were inside with me. The huge yellowish shape went back up. I ran after it, attempting to peck it with my tiny beak, but I missed. Immediatly the sky closed up, and it was dark, the only light coming through, was from little holes in the wall. All of the sudden, we began moving, and I heard, “H%R%, !#K% !H%@% !& !H% ~#R. )^ (%PH%W@ &RD%R%D # J%R@%^ G$#N! P*LL%!, # PH%&($X ~&~K%R#L, #(D # S*)#!R# ~&~K%R#L. (&W G%! )&V$(G.”
I had no idea what that meant. Then I heard a loud clunk, and a loud vibration. I peeked out of a tiny hole, and saw a soft, greyish brown landscape. “Where are we?”
asked Rod. “I have no idea.”
I said, and heard a loud slam. Then, we began to move, again.


And...


As soon as I felt a slight jostle, I knew it was time. Time to escape this miniature world that had nurtured me for so long. I moved, inside this thing, and began to break free. I was ready to take over the new world. After all, I had started out as a tiny speck, then grew into a huge thing that could barely be contained by this domed world. I rolled, and bashed the large, hard thing on the front of my face into its walls, attempting to escape. I bashed a hole in it, and saw a strange, grey landscape. I powered the hard thing on my face into it, breaking a larger hole in it. I opened the hard thing, and something rushed into it. I couldn’t see it, but I began to suck it in, then out, in, out. I looked hard, and saw a slight glow from a long tube.
“Hey!” I yelled into it. I heard some voices.
“Hello?” It’s voice was slightly higher pitched then my own.
“Hey! Do you know what this…thing is on my face?” I yelled to the other creature, not knowing what it was. I rolled slightly and bashed another hole. I could see a field of small round things.
“It’s called a beak.” I heard from a dome not too far away.
“Now pipe down. I’m trying to save my energy to get out of this egg.” I watched as an egg wiggled, and I saw a lot of holes, sort of in a line.
“What’s your name?” I heard the higher pitched voice ask.
“Um…uh…Ryo. My name is Ryo.” I said, proud of myself for coming up with a name.
“I’m Shelly, if you want to know.” Said the high pitched voice.
“I’m out!”
“Your name is Out?” I asked, confused.
“No, I’m out of my egg.” I looked out of the hole in my egg, and saw a small creature with a hard beak, and little black things that disappeared from time to time.
“I’m Rod, by the way. Now stop talking, and start pecking.” I did what he said, and began to peck at my egg. I was getting tired, fast.
“I would help,” Rod said, “But I can’t walk. To weak.” I focused on pecking. I wanted OUT! I began to push myself out of the crack. All I managed to get through was my beak. I slipped it back in, and pushed with all my might. It began to crack. In less than a second,my legs gave way and I fell asleep. When I woke up, there were more cracks in it.
“Rod, did you-“
“Yep.” I looked through the crack and saw a huge creature. It was a little yellow, with black and white stripes on its back. In between those, it had reddish fuzz.
“Yah!!! What are you? What did you do to Rod???” I yelled, pushing, and pecking with all my might in an attempt to get out. Suddenly, it cracked open, and I shot out! I flopped on another egg, and heard:
“Ouch!” I looked down, and saw a flash of black and gold.
“Shelly? Sorry.” I said, and pecked at her shell a little, helping her a little.
“Thanks.” I looked up. There were long glowing tubes that twisted in crazy directions. That was all I could do right now, move my head. I was just plain yellow. I sighed. At least Shelly got some black in her. I fell asleep on that thought.

Not a full editing, as I am not the writer.

 

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I tried to make all of my edited parts bold, but I didn't have time.

I hope to see more!

 

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Fixed 'em!

 

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Oops, sorry. Do you mind if I use yours? That would be very helpful.

 

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Thats why I made it, to save your time. So you can write more,

 

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Much better! You even advanced it,

 

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The next chappy is really important. I'll let you guys know that.

 

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Chapter 3

I opened my eyes, and looked around. I was sitting on some sort of soft field. I looked around, and saw Rod walking around. I wandered over, and tripped on the soft stuff. “Hey, Rod!” I called out, getting up.
“Hey! How’s it going?” he asked, trotting over to me across the ‘soft’, and stopping to help me up.
“I’m fine, I’m fine.” I said, standing up. I glanced warily around. It seemed a lot like the place we were born, except with a high ceiling and light. I looked up, and started in surprise. A massive thing was looming above.
“Run!” shouted Rod. It pulled off the ceiling, and we both ran. It was chasing me around this massive place, and I was soon cornered. It grabbed hold of me, and lifted me clear off the ground.
“Ryo!” I heard from below. Looking down, I saw Rod looking up at me. I was being carried away by a smaller version of the massive thing that had put the band on my leg.
“Probably just going to get another stupid band by the stupid thing.” I muttered. Then, to my utter and great surprise, I heard, “I beg your pardon?” I looked up at a huge thing, with two blue orbs, a large triangle on it, and something that looked like a little wound I had gotten on my wing. Except this one was much larger. I looked at it, and said,
“Who are you? What are you?” The wound on the thing opened, revealing white objects inside.
“I am a human. And who I am is The Keeper, to my chickens. Who are you, little chicken?” it said, those blue orbs looking down at me.
“I am Ryo.” I said, standing proudly.
“And what did you say I was? A chicken?” I asked, looking at the blue orbs.
“Yes, you are a chicken. A Sumatra, I think.” The Keeper said, opening the wound again, revealing the white things.
“What are those white things?” I asked him quizzically.
A booming sound erupted from the wound.
“Oh, they’re called teeth.” The Keeper said, pointing a pole at one,
“And this is a mouth, my nose, and these are my eyes.” He said, pointing to each in turn.
“Well. It was nice meeting you Ryo, but you have to go back in the brooder.” The Keeper said, and we began to move back to the ‘brooder’. He placed me inside, and his hand followed Rod.
“Rod! Its okay, the human is friendly!” I said, and he stopped. The Keeper took the opportunity to snatch him up and carry him away. “Ryooooo!” He called, as he was taken away. I looked over, and saw that Shelly was having a conversation with a little chicken, smaller than me. It had a little fluff ball on its head, and had five toes! I wandered over to chat, thinking how Rod would react when he got back. I hoped he wasn’t mad.

Tada!

 

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